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Toothlessness


A 5-7-5 for fun

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A contrasting self-portrait eh? lol That's too funny. You made me giggle this morning dearie... I really needed it... my back's been killing me for the last three days. (thanks for the giggle... ouch!) it was so worth it! hehehe


 Comment Written 19-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
    Many thanks for this light-hearted review. Sorry to hear about your back. I have had trouble with mine in the past but it appears to be in remission at present.
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Oh my land, it looks like you and Melissa are competing for cute baby pics. This is another cute one for sure. :)

And you made a great point in a fine short poem too.

Ha, keep it up, cause this is entertaining. :)

Gloria


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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
    This one came to me when I was putting my own back in. Manby thanks for the review.
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Yes, your selection of baby pictures reminded me of Sugarray77's cherub. I enjoyed your perplexing question in this 5-7-5 form. Toothless or not, you should chomp on more of these short forms! Big toothy smiles- Joan


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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
    Thanks for the review and the advice, which I doubt if I will take unless more brilliant ideas assail me. Lol.

reply by Joan E. on 15-Jan-2020
    I hope you won't be able to resist those next, brilliant ideas! More smiles- Joan
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Lol! That's a good question. We've all idolized youth, I guess. And society tends to fear death and aging foretells death. That's my answer anyway.
In societies where death is associated with starvation, fat is considered beautiful. In societies where fatness is associated with dying of obesity-related illness, skinny is beautiful.


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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
    I reckon you have got it about right there. Many thanks for the review.
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This is not your baby picture? AAAWWW
Nicely done 5-7-5 and so true, guess it is the chubby cheeks that save the look.
I had a very hard time reading the yellow, just letting you know


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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
    Nothing to do with me I assure you. It's that Google feller been putting himself about about again. Many thanks for reviewing
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Hi Jim, thank you for sparing us that wonderful picture of the baby girl again lol, although it does look like the same baby girl without checking, just a bit younger and in yellow, probably wrong and thanks for sharing.
Cheers Colin


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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
    No, Colin it is another one of Google's. He don't arf put 'himself about, don'ee. Many thanks for reviewing.


reply by Colin Lowley on 14-Jan-2020
    Ha ha ok cheers Jim
    Keep a watch out on tomorrows post you may find it interesting.007 .
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Being discovered without teeth is a cause of huge embarrassment. I was always in fear of it when my granddaughter burst into our bedroom at some ungodly hour screaming, "Time to get up, Grandpa!"
I am not at my best without teeth, hearing aids, and spectacles!


 Comment Written 14-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
    What about the wooden leg? Thanks for reviewing. This bit of nonsense.
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-That is one adorable baby.
-Very nice presentation, too.
-A very good poem about
the difference between the
young and the old.
-I guess we will stick with
what is cute!
-Thanks for sharing.
Now everyone can go
"Awwwwwwww."


 Comment Written 14-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
    They all look like like Winston Churchill when they are born and then the pass through the cute stage. It's all downhill from then on. Lol. Many thanks for reviewing.

reply by Pam (respa) on 14-Jan-2020
    You are very welcome. I have to differ with the Churchill comparison. In the long run, it all depends on the genes:)
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I think wrinkles might have something to do with it! This is a cute picture and my granddaughter has her two front teeth missing just now and it looks cute too! This is a fun post, much enjoyed, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 14-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
    I only wrote it to get a place in the ratings. Lol. Many thanks for reviewing it.

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 15-Jan-2020
    Ha ha ha!
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Now THAT is a very good point Jimmy the look is certainly not very becoming it gives the look of a homeless vagrant in the old but a loving cute addition in the young.
Cute poem, cute kid...Grandchild?

dip


 Comment Written 14-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
    Ha ha. My grandchildren are all in their twenties working for their living. No this is one of Google's many thanks for reviewing.
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