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MOT alias TOM

  19 total reviews 
Comment by
May 1
 
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Haha, that's such a creative poem. I love the topic you chose but also the rhymes, they flow so wonderfully. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this fun poem.


 Comment Written 31-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
    Thank you so much xxxx
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bob cullen
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Lowley, may I call you that. As a former agent with ASIO, (official lie) I can report, his real name is OTM, MOT was too easy to guess. With regard to your current slide on the ratings list, I can assure you the first thought was termination, or banishment to the Antartic so be grateful.
I loved your poem. It's irreverence was delightful. But one word of warning. Leave your outside lights on at night. There are some dark people involved with Fanstory.


 Comment Written 17-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
    Cullen no problem, after the matrix was spun and LM did herduty there was just us two left in a warm embrace, the matrix is now in a sunny paradise, MOT now has and resigned all have free rain to read anyone's post and we live happily ever after.Mission accomplished. Cheers 017
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lyenochka
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What an ingenious way to talk about ranking on Fanstory. I've been here for a bit over 3 years and I know it's puzzling. But the poetry area is the most competitive and requires posting two poems every day plus need to connect with lots of fans so that they would review your work. Dolly posted two poems every single day and she was not only the #1 poet but also the #1 Reviewer. Keep posting and reviewing if you are in it for the game part of the site.


 Comment Written 15-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
    Thanks Helem xxx
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Tina Crute
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What an amusing poem about poet's rating. I check it just to see what crazy thing has happened :)
I like that this poem isn't mean or negative, but just poking fun at your rating and a method to get on top! All in good fun. What matters is that you do what you love and rate yourself a winner:)
Tina


 Comment Written 15-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
    Thank you Tina , much appreciated.

reply by Tina Crute on 16-Jan-2020
    You're welcome:)
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Jannypan (Jan)
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Your poem reads well, Collin. The rhymes are good with great flow and imagery. The rankings are confusing, but not much can be done--they fall where they fall. I like your color scheme and the characters in your poem. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan


 Comment Written 15-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
    Thank you for your review Jan, I have excepted MOTS answer sorry Tom, and will move on now it's off my chest lol. Many thanks for your comments they are much appreciated. Kind regards Colin X
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Barbaraj1
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Colin, this is a very clever poem. I agree with you about the ranking. I
don't even bother with it. I am never going to get more than 10 or 15
reviews. This whole business of promoting your poem is silly.
Everything you said in your poem is true. LOL


 Comment Written 15-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
    Many thanks Barbara, and I must admit it was fun writing this in anger lol. It got the best out of me.. just kidding! Over it and getting my head into more writing. Kind regards Colin xx
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Therese Caron
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I could not read the top part of your poem because I use an iPad and every time I tried to turn it, of course the writing turned also. I also had a lot of trouble with the font, and had to enlarge it a lot to read it. Maybe it's just my iPad and I'm sure your poem is wonderful


 Comment Written 15-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
    Hi Therese, Sorry about the font, I posted before I went to work this morning and was good on the computer, when I got to work the same as you and very difficult to read, thank you for the 5 stars and appreciate your kind words. Kind regards Colin X

reply by Therese Caron on 15-Jan-2020
    I read some other ratings and it seems like a great poem.

reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
    I am a British secret agent, 017 that?s me,
    my mission is to find answers, here at Fanstory.
    I have been undercover for almost one full year,
    writing poems and stories, but now I live in fear.

    My status has been halted, cover may have been blown,
    MOT alias TOM I don?t think is on his own,
    for three days now I have been in Skyfall,
    the matrix that shows our points has gone up the wall.

    Hundreds of new writers have flooded the gates,
    maybe they are working for Spectre as MOT dictates,
    everytime I have quizzed him, he is right all the time,
    yet a secret message in a bottle started this rhyme.

    In three days, I have gone down from 16 to 26,
    blood on my nails, my mind playing tricks,
    who are my friends that keep far away?
    Are they part of this? Or will they make a play.

    Now LM has been helpful she has stood by my side,
    A double secret agent and an Australian inside,
    Britain and the commonwealth will take it on the chin,
    back to London tomorrow, MI5 have a plan to win.

    Their plan is as follows because nothing else makes sense,
    It is full of danger and all at Fanstory will be tense,
    The matrix will be turned, yes turned, right upside down,
    Those at the bottom will be thrown right around.

    I will then fall, all the way to number 1
    LM behind me with her Gatling gun,
    She will do the right thing and push all out of the way,
    that could land on me, at the top for just one day.

    Therese
    It is not the final posting, I may have edited a couple of times, hope that's ok, you got me too 15 reviews so hopefully they still recognize this. cheers Colin x

reply by Therese Caron on 15-Jan-2020
    Great poem, just like I thought!
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dragonpoet
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This poem makes me believe that there is a conspiracy against you becoming the number 1 writer on this site. I like your idea on how to slide in that position.
I don't care about my position because I don't think I write enough to be in the top tier.
Keep writing if you want to rise and keep MI5 and MI6 on it. You have to remember this is a worldwide site.
dragonpoet


 Comment Written 15-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
    Ha ha, over it now as it seems common practice over two months, now it's off my chest I will move on. Or will I find evidence to take back to London..and share with our friends around the globe.. Who knows, Cheers my friend, see you at the top. Kind regards Colin

reply by dragonpoet on 15-Jan-2020
    You're welcome, Colin.
    Maybe we can get the CIA involved too.
    Joan

reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
    Ha ha , yes Tom is very quite about this, maybe he has something to hide, opps hope he is not watching lol.
Comment by
BeasPeas
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Hi Colin. Yes, it is upsy-downsy. I believe this is because each new year the whole rating system is tossed out and writers view jockey for position in all the categories across the board. It usually straightens out after a few weeks. Your poem is fun and unique. Marilyn


 Comment Written 15-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
    ha ha , thank you very much Marilyn, I sort of understand that and feel better now with the aid of poetry. It's off my chest now lol,
    Kind regards Colin X
Comment by
Raffaelina Lowcock
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  Rank:  53
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  Rank:  33
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  Rank:  49
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Hi Colin. My you have been prolific. This is a very entertaining poem about your ranking. I am a bit befuddled though I am not sure what you mean when you say you are in Sky-fall. How can you go from 16 to 26?


 Comment Written 15-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
    Hi Raffaelina, now I am at 33 going down the pecking order, check your status and maybe look at yours today and tomorrow and see my note in the community page, points are going down instead of going
    up from 5.185 3 days ago I am now at 5.105 or close. Cheers Colin remember your seven reviews and a few others none of it helps at the moment and you are my 10th on this one today plus 2 others, I will probably still go dwn in the morning. Cheers Colin XX hope that's clear X
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