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Come, Tears of Heaven


My prayer

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Mary Kay Bonfante
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Sally, I didn't see this poem at the time you posted it, but it's a perfect prayer... and God answered it! I love your presentation. We continue to pray for Australia, for although the rain came, the needs don't end, and the need for God's mercy is ongoing.


 Comment Written 29-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
    Thank you, Mary Lay. I'm so pleased you scope out my older work. It means so much to me that you enjoyed this as well. I came as a prayer.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xoxo

reply by Mary Kay Bonfante on 30-Jan-2020
    You're very welcome, Sally. When I came across it and saw the title, I couldn't resist reading it. xoxo
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I read that it rained quite a bit there. But I don't know about anything else. We can hope God continues to send His tears of healing. This poem is very poignant and speaks what is everyone's heart. Thank you.


 Comment Written 20-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
    Thank you, dear Liz. Yes, the rains have come! I'm so glad God has heard my prayers.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo

reply by Liz O'Neill on 21-Jan-2020
    Many people are praying & dowsing for healing on all levels for all the living
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Hi Sally,
"tears"... water... rain... the thought is conveyed in these six words. Australia needs rain. The country needs God to intervene.
But, you know, there are many people who would blame God for the catastrophe. However, mankind has ruined the planet. They continue to ruin it. The polar ice is melting, and coastal towns and cities around the world are flooding every spring, or every hurricane. It can only get worse. We are destroying lakes and oceans as well with plastic. Years ago, we didn't use plastic like we do today. Groceries were packed in brown paper bags. I could go on and on, but you get the point I'm making. We've got to wake up and smell the coffee!
Cheers
Kimbob


 Comment Written 18-Jan-2020



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    I comfort myself in the fact that God is still at His post as Lord over all the earth. Mankind's need of Him and his ways has never been clearer to me. Lostness creates this kind of attitude towards human life and all of God's created world. All of this, is so precious!!
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
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Oh, wow, this is fabulous. You really knew how to choose the right words to convey your message. God's tears would put out the fire, yes, but you're also expressing His dismay. Good work! Hugs, Lou


 Comment Written 17-Jan-2020



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    Thank you, dear Lou. Your kind review is so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
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Perfection. What a beautiful entry and all done in 6 profound words! The photo choice is excellent. As usual, you hit the mark spot on! I want your energy and motivation to write AGAIN. Each time I read something of yours, I think, "I will get back to it soon!" While that is not happening quickly, keep it coming. One of these days you will push me to pen and paper! Hugs to you!
Wendy


 Comment Written 17-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
    Thank you, Wendy dear. The day after I wrote this, rains moved towards the fires. I honestly believe God has heard our prayers!!!
    I'm continuing to pray, for my list is long and many are suffering such hard things. I think of you and pray again. I hope you are strengthened and sustained by His love and grace.
    Love to you all,
    Sally xoxoxo
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From what I heard I think they have had some rain. Probably not enough rain though. I can't imagine having something like that happen. All those people and animals that were affected. Heartbreaking for sure


 Comment Written 17-Jan-2020



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    Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. It is always needed and appreciated.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
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What a truly wonderful 6 word poem. A beautiful place being burned to death. All that wonderful wildlife, taken. Yes God, please send your tears to Australia. Thank you for this superb poem!


 Comment Written 16-Jan-2020



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    Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind comments. It is always so appreciated, dear Therese.
    Sal xo
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Hello Sally,

I just popped in for a while and as I was browsing through the pages I spotted this beautiful prayer. I'm sure it's one that millions of people around the world have been saying for quite some time. However, it just looks and feels more powerful when it's put into written words.

With the rains coming and all the volunteer firefighters from many different countries, including America, hopefully, it will be under control soon.

How have you been? I've missed talking to you. I've almost completely quit writing due to my health and loss of interest. After checking your profile page it looks like the complete opposite for you. You've been busy lately, thank the Lord.

Congratulations on all those wins recently, keep it up. I predict that you will be the number one writer on Fanstory in the very near future...Take care of yourself and keep writing...God bless you and your family...Bill


 Comment Written 16-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
    To see your name makes me cry. I miss you so bad. Thank you for this. I know reading is a big deal these days. I'm just so glad to see your name and read this kimd review. The stars are very generous and kind, too. I appreciate them so much.

    I finished What The Blind Girl Saw Sunday. I listed you in my thanks you'd in the Epilogue. I am very thankful for you, Bill. I will let you know when it is printed. I'm working on it with the help of my family and WalkerMan.
    All my nest,
    You friend,
    Sal xo
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Thank you for sharing your prayer and shower of tears in this abstract artwork. Your 6-Word Poem says what most of us have been thinking for weeks. Best wishes in the contest and to all dealing with wildfires- Joan


 Comment Written 16-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
    Thank you, dear Joan. I appreciate the kind review and for standing with me today. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xoxo
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Wouldn't that be great, they need the rain from heaven! I love your meaningful 6-word poem. An excellent entry for the contest, God bless you, Laura. ^_^


 Comment Written 16-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
    Thank you very much for the lovely review. It is so appreciated, dear Laura.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
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