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Aaqib Naeem
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Wow! It was such a wonderful piece of writing. Beautifully written and the way you explained it is just amazing. I hope you'll go far in this contest. Wishing you luck!


 Comment Written 17-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
    Thanks so much for the review. Song parodies are always tricky because they depend largely on the reader being familiar with the original.
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w.j.debi
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This is a creative take on the contest prompt. Looks like his goose is cooked. That was quick thinking on her part, especially since she is drugged. Good thing the cops showed up in time.


 Comment Written 15-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
    Thanks - I like to write song parodies, the prompt and the season made "Baby It's Cold Outside" come to mind.
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Jan Anderegg
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Wow. I'm impressed. This was very cleverly written. I didn't see any errors or nits anywhere. This is brilliant. Enjoyed it from the first line to the last. What a great ending too! LOL Serves him right!
All the best,
Jan


 Comment Written 15-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020
    Thanks for the great review and the six.
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