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Mind the speed bumps


Only in England

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May 1
 
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I love the rhythm and rhymes of this poem, they work rather well for me. Also, I love your choice of topic quite different than what I usually find. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem.


 Comment Written 27-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
    Thank you so much May , love this photo xx
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Melissa
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I love your running commentary on speed bumps and the greedy authorities who fine everyone by camera now. We have toll zones that just automatically zap you with no tollbooth in sight... you must prepay and have a device mounted on the windshield... criminal!!! Well written

Melissa


 Comment Written 22-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
    Thank you Melissa , they are so annoying xxx
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kahpot
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Yes the curse of the hidden camera the money making tool, as your poem so wonderfully says speed humps do serve several purposes, love the artwork, an excellent read, very well done****kahpot


 Comment Written 20-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
    Thank you , and it has to be one of my favorite photos, and London.
    Cheers
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Raffaelina Lowcock
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Good analyses and advice regarding the bumps. They are everywhere Colin, not just in England. Believe me, Canada is rife with them as is the USA. Annoying, I'll grant you, but I presume they are helpful on side streets.


 Comment Written 20-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
    Thanks Raffaelina... did not know as bad in your country.. Cheers Colin X
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