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On a train to London


As it happens lol

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Melissa
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Cute, cute, cute!! You did a really good job of sharing your embarrassment with us. The humorous phrase... a red retreat... was perfect. I always look forward to you photograph. You present it really well and I can take a peek into your British world... we do not ride the trains much here. Everyone seems to go by car. Great read Colin.

Melissa


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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
    ha ha, well it did get busier and busier at each stop, about 10 till fenchurch street lol, Cheers Colin
    and I would never put my feet on the chairs as some do.
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You are a dreamer. There is no end to your imagination, right? Your mind never stops. I picture you as a very keen observer never missing a trick. Good job here.


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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
    Ha ha , dead right I see poetry in everything and have taken some great snaps today lol xx
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Will you forgive me, Colin,
if I say to thee
thy manners are much better, lad,
than thy dire poetry.
This tale of sleepy journey
in the middle of the day
should send a message clear and loud
'Go down teetotal's way.


 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020
    Hope you know it's not true Jim , as my footnote lol . Cheers

reply by Pantygynt on 21-Jan-2020
    I guessed as much.
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