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Love Can't Move Mountains


A 5-7-5 poem

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I have been in the hospital for four month sorry it took me so long to read your wonderful work
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they area a perfect math. I love when a writer can say so much with so few words.
Thank you Fr sharing.
Cookie


 Comment Written 30-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 30-Jan-2020
    Thank you for your wonderful review and comments, and I do hope you feeling better****kahpot

reply by Miss Cookie Atkinson on 31-Jan-2020
    Your very welcome. you stay on praying ground.
    Cookie
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Though love can't move mountains it is certainly the catalyst for many a wonderful deed. Those who are inspired by love are energized to the nth degree to do just about anything to prove it.


 Comment Written 26-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
    Thank you for your wonderful review and comments, much appreciated****kahpot
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I really enjoyed this unique entry for the 5-7-5 poem contest. I like your author note as well and your lovely illustration as well. I wish you good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 25-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
    I am glad you liked this short work, your review and comments are much appreciated****kahpot

reply by Minglement on 25-Jan-2020
    You are welcome :)
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Your picture was a great choice with your 5-7-5 poem.

"circles their entirety" ... a great turn of phrase.

Best of luck in the 5-7-5 Poetry Writing contest.

I enjoyed the read.


 Comment Written 25-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
    Thank you for this wonderful review, much appreciated****kahpot
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I like your version of faith, which is really the whole point of faith. Love is quite literally the very motivation that triggered the reason fo Jesus, a great entry in this 5/7/5 poetry contest, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy


 Comment Written 25-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
    Thank you so much for reading this as intended, very much appreciated****kahot

reply by royowen on 25-Jan-2020
    Well done
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Hi Kahpot, that's an amazing image and poem to go along with it. Love can indeed seem to move mountains, so far as I'm concerned... lol, I've seen it work miracles over time. :)


 Comment Written 24-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
    Thank you for your great comments and review
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A lovely 5-7-5 poem with great description, lovely wording, and an image that really complements your writing. This is a wonderful poem for the contest. Good luck!


 Comment Written 24-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
    Thank you for your wonderful review
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Oh, kahpot, I do so wish I wasn't out of sixes -- this is just so simply and beautifully stated!! ;) No, you're right, it can't but it sure makes us feel like it can with its touch, doesn't! :) Thanx so much for that smile and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette


 Comment Written 24-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
    Thank you so very much, thought I would think about it a bit differently, as always very much appreciated
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Hello ****kahpot

Oh I don't know about moving mountains either. I've certainly done my best to move a couple, however, it doesn't work most of the time. lol. Your format count is perfect but, I'm shaking my head about that second line. What exactly are your circling again? I enjoyed the content and the humor (well I have a strange sense of humor) I see in this one. Good luck in your contest. xoxo Kiwi


 Comment Written 24-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
    Thank you Kiwi, I was hoping that it might read as "love can't move mountains" it would find away by circling them, as always much appreciated
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You did a good job with your well-chosen words for your contest entry, Kahpot. The syllables are correct per line, the image is a good pairing, and your message is clear. While love can't move mountains, it can move another person in a sense that can make him/her a better person. With love, everything is possible when one believes in their heart. When I say 'everything', I am referring to what is humanly possible. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Respectfully, Jan


 Comment Written 24-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
    Thank you Jan, yes I thought I would try and look at love a bit differently, as always much appreciated
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