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susand3022
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Oh! Come on, Colin... lol That's just too much! Sausage dumping 101. Well, I've heard it all on Fanstory now. I needed a good laugh tonight... was that poor thing really looking up at a spotty bum? LOL


 Comment Written 24-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
    Ha ha , glad you enjoyed , he got off you know the guy with a spotty bum but to late he flushed lol x
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Oh my, what a delightful commentary on a usually uncommented upon procedure. Loved your images and rhyming. Your photo is a perfect accompaniment to the start of your story - glad you didn't choose one of the ending... ...ec


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
    Ha ha Elaine, just a bit of wordly fun. Thanks for the review. Kind regards Colin X
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A sausage to the end. What a metamorphosis, and so graphically described from the poor banger's point of view - a somewhat ugly view above, or so it seems.


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
    Ha ha, thanks for the review, I don,t know where this one came from. cheers Colin
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That left me a bad taste in the mouth.
This cute little piece is certainly not one you want to repeat at the dinner table.
You used your words in a way the reader could visualize every line. Good work.
Thanks (I think) for sharing.


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
    ha ha. You win some you loose some
    all in all just a bit of fun.
    Thanks for the review. Kind regards Colin
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Raffaelina Lowcock
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RLOL. I'm laughing. The travels of a sausage story is very comical and entertaining. I wasn't quite expecting to follow him into the toilet bowl.
The picture is yummy.


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
    ha ha, don,t know where this one came from lol, the sausages are from camping with my son , he is a great cook and these were yummy. not all mine we shared lol xx
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