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Rugby today


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Well, Colin... when I was a kid, we didn't have Rugby... we still don't here. But, you know how us kids were back in our day... all kinds of rough and tumble. We had our own little neighborhood game we called Muckle. Easy, 1football, 1 goal. Get it across the line and you score. You start at one end of the yard, park or wherever you happen to be, throw up the ball and whoever manages to catch it, runs like hell for the goal. Everyone else tries like hell to cream his sorry ass into the ground as hard as they possibly can... pig-piling is always good... get the ball, and run yourself... as fast as if the devil's on your ass, because everyone's back up and running again and now they're after you! LOL


 Comment Written 26-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
    Understand Susan, thank you for your reviews xx
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What darling picture, Colin! You can really be proud of those two cutie pies. I really enjoyed reading this spunky little poem about them. It has some sound advice to offer...especially about bullies. I can really get up onto a soapbox about that terrible subject and how it affects so many victims. xo


 Comment Written 25-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
    Hi Janet, thank you for taking the time on this one, much appreciated xx

reply by Spangle on 26-Jan-2020
    I'm sorry I can't be as active here as I was before, my friend. Health concerns and other things are filling up my time too quickly. Too bad we can't stop the clock for a few hours each day. lol
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Whats good for mom is good for the twins, I say.
Excellent rhyme and flow and it was fun to read about granddads idea of toughening the kids. LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


 Comment Written 25-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
    Ha ha thanks Barb x
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You are such a doting grandad! Wow! I don't know what your daughter will think when she finds out, but be prepared. Your total concern for your grandchildren is so heartfelt, Colin. Your poem informs us of that.


 Comment Written 25-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
    Thanks Raffaelina , having them again tomorrow xx

reply by Raffaelina Lowcock on 25-Jan-2020
    You are dauntless!
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They are so adorable!!! I loved your rhymes and think them perfect choices for this type of verse. You could not have chosen a cuter theme. Well done, Colin.

Melissa


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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
    Thanks Melissa xx
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Lol. Sports is a very good thing for health, and learning teamwork, and perhaps as you say, to learn some self-defense. The best part is the time you spent with them. Nicely rhyme quatrains!


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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
    Thanks Helen xx
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Aw they are gorgeous! I'm sure they would be able to do anything they put their mind to, together. I love your poem, and I bet they will too when you read it to them. It's so nice to read something homely. :) Sandra xxx


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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
    Hi Sandra, thank you so much for the review and I did go rugby but with my daughter lol, and they only threw the ball in a hall, the people in the background were schoolboys about under 14s lol.
    Cheers Colin X
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