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Less Than Wrought


Only veils of the spoken

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Comment by
Sally Law
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Yes, Yu our are a deep and I respective poet as seen here. So beautifully penned and formatted in your unique style, dear Ronni. Outstanding as always. I can never pick a favorite!!

Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo


 Comment Written 27-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
    Thank you dear Sally, so pleased you enjoyed and shared your
    warm and gracious comments and compliments dear. Hope
    you have a gorgeous week with sunshine and smiles of quiet
    joys alighting within you all day and night through!
    Love, Ronni
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I truly loved this poem. It seems eloquent and sweetly profound to me. I especially liked this part... what we say is less than what mind thought. I suspect this is especially true of poets and storytellers. You are a deep thinker my friend. Thanks for sharing your wisdom so beautifully with us. MM


 Comment Written 26-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
    Hello dear Merri!
    Such a wonderfully heartwarming surprise dear to have you share
    your most gratifying and appreciative comments and compliments!
    Pleased you enjoyed, been awhile, yet always such a welcome visit
    from you whenever it is! And thanks too for the extra star dear
    friend, another added surprise, most uplifting indeed.
    Have a gorgeous week, and thanks again for sharing!
    Love, Ronni
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Y. M. Roger
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Oh, my beautiful friend, how right you are!! ;) Words are sometimes the great deceiver.... or at least that deceiver's greatest tools...! ;) :) Wonderfully throught-provoking for the midnight oil... Thanx so much for putting truth to pen (as always)! ;) Yvette


 Comment Written 26-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
    Hi dear Yvette,
    Your added insight that 'words are sometimes the great deceiver...
    or at least that deceiver's greatest tools" is additionally compelling
    and most insightful comparison and dynamic involved. Thank
    you for your added input and appreciations dear friend! Pleased
    you shared so affirmingly with your spot on wisdom & key in to the
    something extra in the context or content that gives it added
    depth and scope. Sincerely appreciated ;) ;)?.Take care...have
    a fantastic week.
    Always, Ronni


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Jesse James Doty
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This is profound, which reaches the depths of what words mean. My favorite stanzas are the last two. Especially the second to the last. "Words are subtle veils of the spoken," there are no truer thoughts than these. It is too bad we don't hear each other speak on Fan Story. So, we are left with the written words we choose. More importance is placed on our word choices and yet, they still silently echo as to whether they are shallow or profound. This is well written and thought-provoking.
Take care, Jesse


 Comment Written 26-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
    Dear Jesse,
    Thank you for your truly right on interpretation and perceptions
    on this presentation, you aced it all so perfectly! I agree with
    you wish we could hear our fellow fan storian's speak in
    voice, and must make do with our own intuitions or vibes we
    get from their writings and ways they express themselves. The
    echoes are indeed there in their word choices, sincerity, spirit
    and heart. So pleased you enjoyed and related so inspiringly.
    Take care, and have a wonderful week!
    Gratefully, Ronni

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
    Dear Jesse,
    Thank you for your truly right on interpretation and perceptions
    on this presentation, you aced it all so perfectly! I agree with
    you wish we could hear our fellow fan storian's speak in
    voice, and must make do with our own intuitions or vibes we
    get from their writings and ways they express themselves. The
    echoes are indeed there in their word choices, sincerity, spirit
    and heart. So pleased you enjoyed and related so inspiringly.
    Take care, and have a wonderful week!
    Gratefully, Ronni

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reply by Jesse James Doty on 27-Jan-2020
    Hello Ronni.
    You are very welcome. I am glad I interpreted your meaning as you intended. It made me pause to consider the veil of which you wrote. I was inspired, and enjoyed reading your work. Have a great week.
    Take care, Jesse
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Joan E.
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Welcome back and I hope 2020 has begun well for you. I admired your presentation which establishes the thoughtful mood for this poem. Your tercets are appealing and your "veils" is a very effective metaphor. Warm regards- Joan


 Comment Written 26-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
    Hello Sunshine Gal!
    Gee whiz, was not aware I was considered "gone", nor that anyone
    was counting or keeping track...LO..but thanks for the "welcome
    back'. Being missed is always a lovely surprise too.

    I am a bit vague on your reference to "tercets" being appealing
    but do grasp reference to 'veils' as effective metaphors, your
    technical references being far more extensive than mine. But I
    do thank you for the warm and gracious comments so kindly
    expressed and admiring the presentation.
    Have a fantastic week...
    Hugs, Ronni


reply by Joan E. on 27-Jan-2020
    With "tercets" I was referring to your three-line stanzas. Keep up the splendid work, my friend, and enjoy the new week. More hugs- Joan

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
    Thanks Joan, at least now I
    know what 'tercets' are and
    appreciate the edification.
    In hindsight, I should have
    looked it up myself, instead
    of mentioning it, so pardon
    my lack of proper inquiry being done by myself first.
    Thanks for your time and
    patience in clarifying.
    Gratefully, Ronni
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Irish Rain
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Well, isn't this the truth!
We never really express our thoughts fully,
our words can't.
Even through actions, sometimes love
is only hinted at.
Very deep Miss Ronni.
I read it 3 times, and am still pondering.
Wonderful!
Blessings...


 Comment Written 26-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
    Hello dear Irish Rain!
    Thank you for your most insightful and additionally introspective
    thoughts and comments; you are right on, and truly pleased you
    related and shared with such uplifting affirmations and compliments! Hope you have a terrific week...
    Love, blessings, Ronni

reply by Irish Rain on 26-Jan-2020
    You're most welcome honey!!
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Dolly'sPoems
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In some cases people don't say what they really mean, but my father was a plain speaker and you knew exactly what he was thinking, I learned to be more subtle growing up as speaking the absolute truth can get you into trouble. Food for thought here, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 26-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
    Hello dear Dolly,
    Thank you for your very witty and wise comments and appreciations
    of this one. I had a father much like yours, plain and up front leaving
    no mysteries or guesses. Likewise, like you, I to came to learn the
    harm or unintentional peril of speaking the absolute truth to
    certain people...LO! Thanks for sharing your experience and
    latter day cautions retained. Have a fun week!
    Love, blessings, Ronni
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This poem is truth. I suffer this affliction every day. Grand thoughts translated into stuttering, incomplete words. I think that's why I turned to writing. Whatever I wanted to say, I knew I would probably be more eloquent writing it.

Thank you for sharing this,
Ryan



 Comment Written 26-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
    Thank you for your appreciations of the truths and contrasts in
    this presentation, and relating your own experiences and discretions
    about speaking and writing involving different concepts and
    dynamics. I too happen to be better at writing than speaking, and
    prefer most often so I can fully relate to your situation.
    Thanks for sharing so kindly and thoughtfully.
    Have a wonderful week...keep writing too.
    Best wishes, Ronni
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