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Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "New Playmates"

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"New Playmates'
Is a 80 Words Flash Fiction Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks and good luck with this.
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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
    LOL Thank you so much
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Lol. It's so important for children to have good playmates in the neighborhood. (by the way, the title is missing the 'l' so it reads Paymates)

"said Johnny proudy." (proudly)


 Comment Written 27-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 28-Jan-2020
    Thank you for the catch. No matter how many times I read pieces , I still miss the obvious. Thank you for the cute reivew
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hhe now I don't read stories here but when I saw how short it was being 80 word flash fiction from Barb Ithought it too enticing. You haveme intrigued as well how did Johnny know the age of the others after one of the triplets said he was eight years old? lol gave me a giggle.

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 Comment Written 27-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
    Thank you so much, the innocience of children
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hahahahahaha! That's so funny. It would be hard for a child to understand about triplets. I really enjoyed this. Did you mean 'playmates' in your title?


 Comment Written 27-Jan-2020



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    Thank you so much, the innocence of children
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Barb, This is a delightful 80 word poem you have penned for the 80 Word Flash Fiction contest. What little Johnny said asking not knowing how old the other boys are. And they are triplets. lol. Too cute Barb. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri


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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
    I am honored and I thank you so much. The innocence of childen
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Another fine poem, Barb--don't tell me Johnny's going to grow up and be as stupid as the president? We've GOT to fix our broken education system, for if Don-Boy's any indication, we're screwed!


 Comment Written 27-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 27-Jan-2020
    LOL maybe will. Thank you for the chuckle
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