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Touching The Sky


Allegorical, ethereal and spiritual

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royowen
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I must admit there's nothing better than writing and creating something that gives one a real buzz, creating something that hasn't been written, quite the way one's own hasn't been before, well done, a great Sonnet, blessings, Roy


 Comment Written 30-Jan-2020


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How succinct your Author's notes are. The pleasure we get when we write a pleasant poem that we know is good, is beyond describing and could be compared to touching the sky. The reviews make us soar. The poem says a lot about you in such a gentle way.


 Comment Written 30-Jan-2020


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A very well-written heartfelt poem. When we are little our dreams are to reach the sky and touch one of the million stars when we grow bigger and older we realize it is an impossible dream and we find other things that bring us closer to the stars.


 Comment Written 30-Jan-2020


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Your written words are sure the spoken truth. We don't like to hear the fact that we must give up writing. Writers just never give up, that's what I've been told. And it does put a person on cloud nine! Your writing is great!


 Comment Written 30-Jan-2020


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I love the the words to your poem they captured my attention from the first line to the last. In due time most of us will pass the mountain tops and reach the clouds up high call the Kingdom of Heaven.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie


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It is so human to aspire to something greater than we are. To reach beyond ourselves. You have captured this yearning with heartfelt emotion in your delightful poem.

Poetry raised you up. May it continue to do so.

Blessings Julia


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What a wonderfully written poem. I hope we all get to touch the sky when Jesus splits that eastern sky. Best of luck with your writing!

Have a great day and God bless.
mike


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Great poem! I love how you compared it through age! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!


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What a uplifting feeling - touch the sky, before you die; touch the sky and wonder why:) sorry I got carried away. I feel how you emphasis on this wish starting with the first stanza: lad-try-home-sky; hills-vain- reach-gain etc. all these verbs builds the anticipation of this goal which is reached in the last two verses :"Now, In my last, long years on earth,
touching the sky may soon rebirth."


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Hello jaybird. As expected, you have metered and rhymed your way to another excellent poem. You discuss the attempt to reach the sky but you realize it is not possible in this world.

Poetry is the ladder you used to touch the sky.

Robert

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 Comment Written 30-Jan-2020


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