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Looking for peace and serenity

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Hi Jaybird, What a nice poem and yes I think the older we get the less we worry and can just enjoy our days. Your poem was easy to read with good rhyme and meter. Have a great day Cheers Christine


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Hi Jay. Good rhyming and flow in this poem. I think we're all searching for peace and serenity and, yes, I agree, there are times when we doubt ourselves. Marilyn


 Comment Written 03-Feb-2020


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A well written poem. The third stanza I misread serenity as senility. Perhaps that applies to me. LoL. No edits or adjustments necessary.


 Comment Written 03-Feb-2020


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You poem reads well, Jay, with good rhymes--end and internal, and good imagery. Your message is clear and true. We should all strive to become free of our fears. Thanks for sharing. Jan


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And just keep on going. Life is still good, even as you grow older. You know things. YOu can share and encourage from what you know. Good poem to remind us of that.


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I enjoyed your poem and completely understand the feeling of being close to the good things in life. I think now that I'm older I can let go of so many things that held me back in the past, and I am definitely a happier person. Thank you for your poem.


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Fear and poor self-esteem are major issues to contend with for sure.
Your rhyme and well structured poem tells us that to lay these aside and you will have a better life. Nice work!
Drew


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Fear especially seems to haunt us - these are uplifting sentiments expressed here - full of hope and encouragement - well worth trying out ! thanks for sharing


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What an upbeat positive outlook on life as we journey through, "Tomorrow, if the sun should shine,
I'll be up there, perched on cloud nine. How uplifting!


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I enjoyed your poem. In my twilight years I fully ascribe to your stated philosophy! Continue to enjoy each day and best wishes to you up there on cloud nine.


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