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Looking for peace and serenity

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Jeffrey L. Michaux
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This is a good way to approach life when we're not quite as young as we use to be. We should enjoy the right way what life we have left that the good Lord has allowed us to have. I enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done!


 Comment Written 03-Feb-2020


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This is a nicely written poem about finding internal peace and serenity.
Sometimes it is hard to find it but it is worth the search. Faith helps.
Keep writing
Joan


 Comment Written 03-Feb-2020


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From what I've gleaned from your work so far, Jay, I've never had a reason to believe that your life has been so problematical - the theme of your poem.
I hope tomorrow, sunny or not, everything will be hunky-dory.
Don


 Comment Written 03-Feb-2020


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I love the words to your poem It captured my attention from the first line to the last . Your words are so true'Believe me since I have been home which is a month I wasn't giving a home health aide and it is becoming very stressful for me to do thing on my own. My daughter been calling the agency and two people are not longer working there and that came from the supervisor who said she get me on it.
God bough me this far I don't want to go back to the re hap center.at least that one.
Take care.
Cookie


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Hello Jaybird. Your poem does a wonderful job of expressing your peace and serenity of a better day. I think we all would like to feel confident that we each might find such a day.

Robert




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Thank you for sharing that sense of peace you have. It's wonderful that you are "free from the life of strife" and that "doubt and fear" are no longer in your way. What a great encouragement!


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A good read. The narrator's reflection on the things that held them back from a life of serenity, and the eventual freedom from them...I could see the chains falling to the ground.


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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. I really enjoyed reading it and it is something that I can appreciate and relate to. Very nicely done.


 Comment Written 03-Feb-2020


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This is so true Jake. If we could rid ourselves of doubts and fears, life truly would be more meaningful.

Sage advice my friend. Very nicely done.

Blessings
Janet


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Beautiful words and a beautiful message. There is great wisdom in your writing and I always enjoy reading it. I'm getting up in age myself so I can relate to your poems. Thank you for sharing!


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