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old age

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Excellent ... muchly and well executed with smooth delivery and a caressing voice that opens the theme and deliberates a pasture of rich rhyme with a flurry and constant beat it picks and drives through the rough unaltered laziness that is incoherence and puts a strong voice on its emphasis so as a sentiment and concept can be and is well delivered.


 Comment Written 07-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
    Cheers

reply by Bicpen on 08-Feb-2020
    anytime ...
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This is a rather sad and melancholy write Colin as we all follow in our parents footsteps and die eventually and leave our loved ones behind, time waits for no man, I'm glad you got to know your Mother well before she died, much enjoyed, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 06-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
    Many thanks Dolly
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I liked the way you described your love for your mother. The poem takes a sad turn with your mother's death, but you also express hope when you talk about Angel's watching over you and one day being able to be with your mother again. A beautiful poem.


 Comment Written 06-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 07-Feb-2020
    Many thanks
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This is a very well crafted verse with superb rhymes, a heartfelt theme, and good presentation with soft art. I think you did a great job on this one and it was a pleasure to read.

Melissa


 Comment Written 05-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
    Thank you Mellisa xx
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That's the sweetest poem about your Mum, Colin. :) I do hope that part about you having a weak heart and seeing her soon is bogus... I haven't been able to make it to your little Islet yet! (not that I likely ever will, but it's a nice thought.) :)


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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020
    hi Susan, not about my mum, just thought about all those in old age not me as 60 lol and then had time to think a little.xx
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Aww! Such beautiful reveries Colin. Your memory of your mother is very heartfelt and the Angels watching, as well. We all have that longing to be with our Mothers again, someday. Let's hope we are on the right path to that goal.


 Comment Written 05-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
    Hi Raffelina, not about me this one as only 60 lol, IU just thought about old age and the lost moments. xx
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Oh this is so true, time flies so fast and we become our parents in one way or another whether it be attitude or mind. Very well done in separating and yet reminding us of our fragility


 Comment Written 05-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
    Thanks Barb xx
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This is is one of most lyrical poems I have known you to write. The feelings clearly come from deep down an rhythmically the poem flows smoothly. Well written.


 Comment Written 05-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020
    Cheers jim
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