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A better way to go

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Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello

I like your spiritual poem about life and depression. Good and evil topic from a religious point of view. Nothing better than a peaceful mind.

Good job my friend ???

Gypsy


 Comment Written 10-Feb-2020


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This is an inspiring piece of poetry dear jaybird! If you fall down, you will know how to stand up because that is the only way to go.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
Rebekka x


 Comment Written 10-Feb-2020


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This is a very good motivational piece and you have valid points here.we have no choice on the afterglow of life. and our greatest assets are our friends.
Writing will take one's mind off our troubles.


 Comment Written 10-Feb-2020


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Hello Jaybird1,
Nice piece of General Poetry having lucid wording, smooth flow from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme.
"...success is if you inspire." 3rd stanza, particularly this line, is noteworthy.


 Comment Written 10-Feb-2020


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I agree with you that writing lifts the spirits. I like the message that we are here to make friends and inspire others. This is a wonderful poem.


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Material things are worthless overall. The Lord and friends, family are what is important and doing good on this earth. It is why we are here, though these days too many forget this. Well done as always sir. Rox


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Home recovering from hip replacement and am too tired to erye, but can read. And this piece really resonated with me. Thank you for sharing such inspiring and uplifting insights.


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I think you've got something going on with this write. It has a powerful message which is believable. You've left no words to the imagination and yet you also don't come off as preachy. I enjoyed this write, so much. xoxo Kiwi


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Writing and painting are the way I keep my sanity in life. Most of my time is a chaotic mess but I can focus on those two outlets. Great poem with a deeper meaning. Have a great week. Gretchen


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a number of great messages of inspiration here--as always an enjoyable read for its carefree rhyming and positive messaging--I'm delighted that you are still creative and generous with your lovely muse

All the Best
Phil


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