This is an inspiring piece of poetry dear jaybird! If you fall down, you will know how to stand up because that is the only way to go.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
This is a very good motivational piece and you have valid points here.we have no choice on the afterglow of life. and our greatest assets are our friends.
Writing will take one's mind off our troubles.
Nice piece of General Poetry having lucid wording, smooth flow from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme.
"...success is if you inspire." 3rd stanza, particularly this line, is noteworthy.
Material things are worthless overall. The Lord and friends, family are what is important and doing good on this earth. It is why we are here, though these days too many forget this. Well done as always sir. Rox
I think you've got something going on with this write. It has a powerful message which is believable. You've left no words to the imagination and yet you also don't come off as preachy. I enjoyed this write, so much. xoxo Kiwi
a number of great messages of inspiration here--as always an enjoyable read for its carefree rhyming and positive messaging--I'm delighted that you are still creative and generous with your lovely muse