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Cabbage Dragon


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No doubt because they don't like cabbage. You mention the playful children. They like to exercise their imaginations and it's quite possible that the see a scary dragon in the cabbage. Great picture. Fun to read. judi


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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
    Turns out it was a lettuce leviathan.

reply by judiverse on 10-Feb-2020
    An understandable mistake, it think. judi
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Hmm. Is that a dragon that eats cabbages or a dragon composed of cabbages or a cabbage that looks like a dragon? Whatever the case, I'm sure that the kids are safe!


 Comment Written 09-Feb-2020



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    Unless it?s a savage cabbage dragon with a sharp stick and cooties.
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Bill, you can always make me giggle in one way or another! LOL, a Cabbage Dragon? Really? Whoever heard of such a thing? Oh yeah! The kids!!! LOL That's fabulous. You're so funny... :)


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    Thank you, Susan.
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LOL!! So funny!! My boys were not a fan either!! ;) :) A wonderful offering of imagination and childhood artistry, Sir Bill! ;) :) Thanx for sharing both with us! ;) Yvette


 Comment Written 09-Feb-2020



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    Thanks, Yvette.
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Children often see the most amazing things. Oh to be blessed with the incredible ability to see and imagine things in the innocent way that a child does. What an advantage that would be for a creative writer.


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    If only, right?

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    Yep.
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Bill,

Children often have unusual and imaginative visions of the simplest of things. Methinks that we try to compose poems along the same lines.

Your selected artwork is a great companion to your limited verse.

Mark


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    Thanks, Mark
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What a delightful little children's poem, written in perfect 5-7-7 syllables. As a child my friends and I would try to give a name to shapes of bushes and clouds, such fun it was. I enjoyed you poem, Bill. Well done. :)) Sandra xxx


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    Thank you, Sandra
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Fantastically whimsical with a nostalgic nod to a youthful imagination. The artwork is a fantastic compliment to the image you are portraying. I really enjoyed reading.


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    Thank you, Autyn
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