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The Letter


A letter from the past arrives

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oliver818
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I really enjoyed reading this poem, it has a very nice feel to it. I particularly enjoyed the descriptions of your friend, they are very poignant. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day


 Comment Written 25-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
    Hello Oliver, Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed. Bless you, K xx
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That was a lovely poem, Kay, your friend sounded like a lovely man, and talented too. Resourceful, in that he used the charcoal from the fire, I wouldn't have thought of that, but that's what artists use! I enjoyed reading this, my friend, I can't write Free Verse, it comes out like a prose story when I've tried, so well done for doing such a great job with this lover tribute to your friend. Good luck in the contest! :)) Sandra xx


 Comment Written 25-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
    Hello Mrs Seagull, Eating fish & chips in the sunshine! Thank you for your kind comments my friend. Love, Kay XX
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A very well-written poem about the man who were there to teach you riding a horse but an accident left him with only one leg and cannot ride anymore but he gives with his family and concentrate on his artistic side and talents.


 Comment Written 23-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
    Thanks for reading Sandra. Glad you like it. K xx
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Aussie your free verse poem
'A letter from the past arrives' is written so well and written with descriptive words about a cowboy that wrote with charcoal. Was a pleasure to read.
Gert



 Comment Written 22-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
    Hello there Gert, We call them stockmen. Thanks so much for the read and the six stars my friend. Love K xx

reply by Gert sherwood on 24-Jun-2020
    Hello Aussie
    Good day or evening to you. You are so welcome.
    Gert

reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
    11.am and brass monkey weather. It was -3 this morning!

reply by Gert sherwood on 24-Jun-2020
    brass monkey weather?
    Gert

reply by Gert sherwood on 24-Jun-2020
    brass monkey weather?
    Gert

reply by the author on 25-Jun-2020
    Er, it is a saying here. It means the nether reasons freeze! Hee, Hee.

reply by Gert sherwood on 25-Jun-2020
    Hello AussieEr, I still don't get what you are saying,
    " It is a saying here. It means the nether reasons freeze! Hee, Hee."
    Gert
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The Letter
by Aussie

Hello, Aussie,

Nice entry for the Free Verse Poetry Contest. I had a friend on this site named Fez. He was from Australia too and wrote about aborigines too. I like that he wrote with charcoal and now he is a famous artist. Well done my friend.


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 22-Jun-2020
    Hello my friend (long time no see) thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed. Kxx
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This is a wonderful tribute to these people who work hard and express their feelings in their art and aboriginal art has become very popular, much enjoyed, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 22-Jun-2020
    Yes, aboriginal art brings in thousands of dollars. At one time, the artists were not being paid at the rate they should have. Now, they are protected and get the right amount. Thank you my friend. Love, Kxx
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I like the story of your special friend who sent you a letter written by charcoal in the long past and you remember some incident; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thank you for sharing this; keep writing. Wish you good luck in the Contest. ALCREATOR


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 22-Jun-2020
    Thank you my friend. Glad you enjoyed. Blessings and thanks for the good wishes for the contest. Kxx
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You adhered to the free verse contest rules and that's important;-) I enjoyed reading this poem through to the end!

Congratulations on your RECOGNIZED STATUS that's very wonderful indeed!

Good luck in the contest my friend!

Thank you for sharing and many blessings to you;-)


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 22-Jun-2020
    Thanks so much Melodie. Blessings, Kxx

reply by Melodie Michelle on 22-Jun-2020
    ;-)
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I like how you bring in your story and poems a piece of that amazing and so far away land -
He was droving cattle
Down the mighty Murray
His horse bolted
Ringer lost his balance

Aboriginal stockmen amazing
This time Ringer gave his leg
Caught in the stirrup
He rode no more -
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.


 Comment Written 22-Jun-2020



reply by the author on 22-Jun-2020
    Iza, We all have a tale to tell about our Great Southern Land. My grandmother was aboriginal. Love Kxx

reply by Iza Deleanu on 23-Jun-2020
    Yup, you will have to share that heritage.

reply by the author on 24-Jun-2020
    I have 16 chapters of Aboriginal Dreamtime if you are interested.
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I enjoyed reading your free verse about a letter from Ringer the stockman. Your descriptive verses really gave me a sense of Ringer, his life. Nicely done Aussie
cheers
valda


 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
    Hello Valda, Thanks so much for reading, glad you enjoyed. Love, Kay.
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