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Super cute. I love how you didn't know it was a cat until the end of the poem!!! I really liked this one a lot. I was expecting it to be about an actual girl.


 Comment Written 04-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
    Hi Dana, thanks for the great review, did you mean to give me three stars as sometimes people press ity by mistake. Cheers Colin
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Its GOOD ...

it has a charm and delivery which is acceptable but it lacks more definitive and pleasing emphasis and character. It has a pen which is proving talent and seeing glimpses of poetic appeal but this is not a five or six in my mind.

all the best for the comp.


 Comment Written 12-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
    no problem, as long as you liked it. cheers

reply by Bicpen on 14-Feb-2020
    I did its just good no more lol my new star regime ...
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I love the rhyming you chose to use for this one. This poem is so beautifully written and fun to read. Also, I love the image you chose for this one. All in all, I enjoyed reading this poem.


 Comment Written 11-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
    Thanks May xx
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from that tree"

Yes you did have fun writing this piece and I was a little confused until I reread the piece and the notes. Excellent, fun piece and great rhyming and flow.


 Comment Written 11-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
    Thanks barb xx
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Hi Colin. I enjoyed reading this. Well written and rhymed. I have a black cat also. However, the purpose of Picture This is to always use the image provided by the club. Once we start substituting our own pix, the purpose of the club is defeated. In the future, please use the image provided. Thank you. Marilyn


 Comment Written 10-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
    Hi Marilyn, It did cross my mind but then got to the add from picture bit and thought I would go for Chewie, but understand and it definitely worked with the last two poems, I will keep to the rules next time, I did not question it this time. xx do youi want me to change or is it two late..?

reply by BeasPeas on 10-Feb-2020
    Hi Colin. For this time, just leave it as is. A good poem. I love cats, too.

    I didn't start this club. It originated years ago and I took it over when the originator left the site. I would hate to see the format changed because it shows continuity of purpose. Thank you, again, for your understanding. :) Marilyn
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How cute is this kittie, Colin!!! You've stolen my heart here. I too found a kitten. I was in college and the girl who was staying in the room down the hall from me had found this kitten in a bag on the side of the road with its siblings. It was the only one left alive. She kept it in her room, with a litter box and food. Then she'd leave for days at a time. The poor thing got fleas and it would meow all the time. One day I couldn't take it anymore. I walked into her room when she had been gone for a couple of days and took the kitten. I gave her a flea bath, took her out for some fresh air, got a new litterbox, food, bowl, etc and kept her. People like that don't deserve pets.


 Comment Written 10-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
    Hi Susan, that's a lovely bold loving thing to do, many thanks Colin xx
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Trying to figure out--are you a dead man looking down on your cat? Is it you or another cat up a tree? The rhythm and rhyming seem somewhat forced. I like the jazzy smile! (Laying s/b lying--I do not deduct for typos.) All the best. LIZ


 Comment Written 10-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
    Hi, Well, it was a bit of fun and two others really enjoyed it and understood it, the cat is writing but you would only get that on the last stanza if you paid attention.. Dolly and Iyenochka are in the top ten poets, so if they got it I am happy.Kind regards Chewie

reply by Elizabeth Emerald on 11-Feb-2020
    I read the poem four times and saw the reviews by your friends. My confusion is not pertinent to the rating. Not to worry--your buds have your back! Cheers. LIZ
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Your sister sounds like she has a kind heart, I expect Chewie has his pawns firmly under the table now. Your tribute poem here is sweet and endearing Colin, much enjoyed, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 10-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
    ha ha many thanks Colin xx
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And that's quite an imaginative cat, who writes, too! I think you did have fun with this. I was looking at that cute cat picture and wondering how this would end but happily, the kitty's in the tree and not in "heaven."


 Comment Written 10-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
    Hi Helen, many thanks Colin xx ha ha
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