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I lost Agustin


I found him

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There is always a little or a lot about living in Mexico that never fails to surprise me. Your adventures with your friends, be they ever so everyday occurrences, are fun to read and imagine.


 Comment Written 12-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
    Thanks, they are fun to write too.
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Hi Sasha, Again a fun read and I'm so happy that you have such very good friends. Now I'm curious to find out where Agustin disappeared to.
Just a few things:
and devorsed a few years ago. = and divorced a few years ago
we alwasy stop along the was pick up thing we ma need. = we always stop along the way picking up things we may need.
Warm regards. Ulla:)))


 Comment Written 12-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
    I'll take another look. I thought I corrected those already. My spell check sucks.

reply by Ulla on 12-Feb-2020
    I know, it can be mental!!

reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
    That describes Agustin perfectly. I think I caught all the spags, but if not, I am sure someone will point it out to me.
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A good ramble and a nice look into your days ... life is good, most of the time. It seems to me that you do have some good folks in your life and perhaps you will write the great novel. Have a good day ... peace friend.


 Comment Written 12-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
    Thanks, if I could type and spell I would be awesome.
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There are spelling errors, but the stories are funny and I don't care if they are perfect. Mine never are. I have a reviewer who always sends at least a page of corrections sometimes more. =[ I'm glad you have fun friends and get to laugh a lot. Laughter is so good for ones soul. Rox


 Comment Written 12-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
    I never see the spags, my spell check sucks.
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As always, it is so good to hear from you. Agustin and Veronica sound delightful. Sounds like they really enjoy being with you, and that you three have your routines down pat. Well almost. When you find out where Agustin went, let us know as well.
You take care of yourself.


 Comment Written 11-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
    Hew went shopping and took a bus home.
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"for me"-- needs a space between words

"...as Augustin is, he, like me(no period)has a poor memor(y). -- add the "y"

"...door handle and (must) wait..." -- add "must"

-no "e" on "occurs"

"...Agustin gets settle(d)--add the"d"

check the spelling of Augustin here--"...to kill our..."

HAHAHAHA! I'm glad Veronica is now driving.

"...Mexican parents..." -- needs a space

"children" doesn't need repeating (even though pale(,) skinned ducks

"How awkward is that(?)"

check spelling of "divorced"

"...pick and (choose)..."

"...(always) stop..."

"...I assume(d) he got back..."

"...an(d) asked her..."

"Some mysteries are never(solved)."

"...to turn of(f) my mini split."

"...cold it get(s)..."

"I search(ed) every..."

LOL. Your life is anything but boring, Sasha. And your rambles are fun to read.


 Comment Written 11-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
    Thanks for catching all the spags. I think I caught them all.

reply by Ideasaregems-Dawn on 11-Feb-2020
    You're welcome. :)

reply by Ideasaregems-Dawn on 11-Feb-2020
    You're welcome.

reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
    My spell check sucks.

reply by Ideasaregems-Dawn on 12-Feb-2020
    LOL. Yep,most of them don't recognize some pretty common words!

reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
    Thanks for catching he spag. I just hate my horrid spell check,it never works.
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Too many spags to list, but still a fun read. About
Veronica in the back seat, it's easy to believe that could happen. I left my son at K-mart's one day and didn't realize it until I got home. He was in the back on the store playing pac-man.
I seem to remember your mentioning Ron before and not in a kind way. :-)


 Comment Written 11-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
    Thanks, I think I finally caught all the spags.
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I was worried when I read the title! But it turns out that Agustin is not permanently lost. Enjoyed the fun you are having with your friends!

Some typos : I'm amazed you can type at all given your eyes and sleep deprivation!

"folowed " (followed)
"font door is difficult" (front)
"someone to open forme" (for me)
" I sit in the front seet " (seat)
"me. has a poor memor. " (me, has a poor memory.)
" The same occurrs" (occurs)
"While this occures," (occurs)
"having big fee. " (feet)
" Mexicanparents, would I have had small fee. "
(Mexican parents...feet)
"devorsed a few years ago." (divorced)
"have to pick and chose" (choose)
"we alwasy stop along the was pick up thing we ma need. " (always stop along the way? to pick up things we may? need.)
" toward Veronica an asked " (and)
"Her laughter contined for several minute" (continued ... minutes)
" I could no find the remote to turn of my mini split. "
(I could not ...off my mini split???)



 Comment Written 11-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
    If I could type and/or spell I would the happiest person on the planet.

reply by lyenochka on 11-Feb-2020
    I'd rather that you got good sleep and could see. Typing can be corrected!
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I'm glad they switched drivers. That sounds very dangerous but I won't lie, I did laugh as I read it. I like that they have rules for when they are in the car with you. How cool is it that your friends are that cool. I'm so thankful you three have each other.


 Comment Written 11-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
    Yes they are so cool. I am lucky to have them.
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I sit in the front seat and my husband does all of the driving when we go to events together. We rarely have anyone in the back seat and have never lost track of them! You'll have to let us know how Augustin managed to disappear and if he helped you find your remote. Best wishes- Joan


 Comment Written 11-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
    He said he already did so my remote is gone,

reply by Joan E. on 11-Feb-2020
    I am so sorry--could it still be hiding behind a couch cushion or bed pillow? -J

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
    He called later and told me he stopped by to see his mother.

reply by Joan E. on 11-Feb-2020
    He is a good son, but he might have let you know that was his plan, so you wouldn't needlessly worry. Smiles- Joan
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