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Just Passing Through


Time is fleeting

  55 total reviews 
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Exceptional
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Perfectly written within its rhymed versification stanzaic sonnet format and simply and truthfully narrated throughout its life's storylined content. A Great Work. I did like it!


 Comment Written 16-Feb-2020


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Boogienights
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Exceptional
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As is mine. Time becomes more precious the older we get. I love this poem because it mirrors so many of my own feelings. You definitely deserve an all time best. Thank you for sharing this.


 Comment Written 16-Feb-2020


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Susan Larson
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This is beautiful and so reflective of those of us who continue to pass through as our loved one arrive at the final destination. Yet I'm thankful we walked together for as long as we did. A nice reminder that there is more good than bad.


 Comment Written 16-Feb-2020


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Joan E.
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Keep writing your poems and celebrating life. Your poem resonated for me at age seventy-six, with a variety of ailments shortening its span. I admired your rhymed sonnet form. Cheers- Joan


 Comment Written 16-Feb-2020


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phil nelson
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Exceptional
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As we get older we can't help but reflect on where we are in relation to our past. your assessment is spot on for so many of us and I hope that you will write many more poems this year
All the Best
Phil


 Comment Written 16-Feb-2020


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Time is fleeting, so poet wishes to live sometime more and write his best works for he is unhappy with his performance in his life; well said, well done.


 Comment Written 16-Feb-2020


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nomi338
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It is kind of sad to be left behind, but at the very same time, I am quite happy to still be here. Able to craft a word or two in poetry to honor the memory of those who have taken that path toward immortality through the very words I have written in their memory. In that way I am serving a needed purpose.


 Comment Written 16-Feb-2020


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Hello Jake,
You appear to have influenced many along the way.
Friends and loves, and poets too,
and some you've never meet who read your words
and perhaps feel the same as you.
From the foothills of Appalachia to the whole wide world
of fanstory friends.
Best wishes to you
Robert



 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020


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Mr.write_4u
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Outstanding. This was a six star poem, but unfortunately I don't have anymore left. It was so smooth and read easily. The rhymes were perfect. It reminds me of a saying. You are not a human being having a spiritual experience, you are a spiritual being having a human experience. Good luck. Thanks for sharing!
Happy writing,
Larry


 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020


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Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello my friend,

What do you mean, your time is short? Are you dying? I hope not. Your poem is very well written and very sad. The presentation is nice.

Gypsy


 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020


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