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Time is fleeting

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dragonpoet
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Well, this has hope in the end that you will have time to write a few more poems about a life that has been long and seems to have been full.
Keep writing
Joan


 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020


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I have no more stars to give.I can relate to what you wrote about
out of all my friends I have one still alive I tell her we are the last f the red hot mama's.
I thank you for sharing
cookie


 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020


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I love your outlook on life (and death) that comes through so loud and clear in your poems which are always a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes Jen,


 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020


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I hear your message loud and clear and applaud you for a deep
and meaningful poem which provides an insight to your life's journey.
Your thoughts are well expressed, the meaning is clear and I think the positive message in your last two lines is a message for us all- we can live our lives or choose to fritter life's moments away afraid to die.
Blessings
Shirley


 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


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well, you need to keep writing and inspiring others. Hopefully you'll be around for a long time sharing your words of wisdom. I enjoyed this poignant write I suppose partly because I am getting there, too :) Nice job :)


 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


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I have enjoyed reading this poem. It is very easy to read and understand. It is original and unique. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!


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This is a great poem. Yes, time passes by. Friends gone and so are long lost loves. But you have had a happy life. I hope to read a lot more of your poems.


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Such lovely sentiments expressed from the heart - wistful and evocative -reminding us that time passes very quickly on our earthly journey - so let's get on with it ! thanks for sharing


 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


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This was a sweet, nostalgic poem that conjures up an image of your fine self doing what you said: "gazing up skywards", musing on the life you've lived, and also knowing that when the time comes, you'll be ready.

But yeah...ya need to write a few more wee poems afore ye take off sonny-boy, otherwise we'll set the dogs after you lol! Loved the poem and hope you'll be around for a fair while longer yet xoxoxox


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Hello jaybird1, Yes time has it's own speed, but I like how you are slowing it down, bringing back memories life has been good, smiles to know the good outnumber all the bad.
Gert


 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


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