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Time is fleeting

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Jeffrey L. Michaux
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I like this Jaybird. It sounds like a poem of reflection. You're thinking over your life, weighing it, pondering the things you've done or not done. I pray that the Lord graces you with many more years to write. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!


 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


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Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written heartfelt poem about seeing life goes by us with many loved ones gone before us we know our time is running out and fee should use that time wisely and make the best of it while we can.


 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


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Hello Jaybird!
Your well-crafted poem is a "gut-puncher": a mixture of sadness and happiness of a life well-lived. Keep smiling and keep writing! That's the best advice I can give. And I know you don't need any of my advice!
A thoughtful and enjoyable read...

Thank you!
diane


 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


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Sally Law
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A man who understands. Time is a daily gift. My eyesight is going away so I never waste a day. If I wake up and I can see to write a little, and see the sunrise on my husband's face, life feels hopeful. A deep poem and a wise one.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sally xo

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 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


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the13thpoet
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Hello Jaybird1, a fabulous Friday to you. Thank you yet again for another beautiful poem. I know you feel your time is running short, but I hope you can keep gracing us with your presence and poetic words for a lot longer. Have a great day my friend.

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