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restore good King

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This is so well worded, it was really fun to read. Also, I love the image you chose for this one since it works really well. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this.


 Comment Written 21-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
    Many many thanks May xx
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I like this photograph and the message you've written as a poem very much, Colin. Life has so many ups and downs, it is good to be able to go off to a soothing place and refresh our relationship with the Lord. He is always waiting to help us grow closer and feel His loving presence. (Maybe I'm actually reading your words wrong, but that is how your posting affected me when I read it.)


 Comment Written 16-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
    Hi Janet, thanks for the review , I think it's in the eye of the beholder and glad you were able to get something from this poem , I am a man of no faith but like rewriting poems as they come xx
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Its good Colin but I feel that as a form unless you wish to deliberate it is failing with a more permanent structure it would be more accessible the word choice is excellent and its concept and idea is good and it strikes a well defined balance between the aid necessary and the element of faith whatever that may be in our own eyes. It is good and I like it I just thought with a more formidable format it would be cool and more deserving of the five or possibly the six. Though short it speaks volumes and picks the head up to question this God that you kneel before ... such is the subject matter.


 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
    many thanks

reply by Bicpen on 16-Feb-2020
    anytime ...
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One wonders what he walking to, or away from, and why. I see a very big, heavy door that is hard to open. I see the inner fight with the door, which is really his own soul. Great poem Colin. Well done, again!


 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
    many thanks xx
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I enjoyed reading this verse Colin and think it reminds me of Elizabethan times and kings knighting brave men. I can see you participating in re-enactments and jousts !! LOL. Well written.

Melissa


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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
    many thanks xx
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I feel like these are the words of a noble knight that wants to restore honor for a place. The door could symbolize the entrance the to place. Lovely architecture!


 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
    Thank you , the photo is from a spar in Cyprus, they had this photo on there brochure and could not wait to take my own,they said fine. xx
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It is difficult when we find ourselves trapped in emotions or anger... but we know that somewhere we have to find hope for tomorrow or forgiveness of yesterday so that we can walk free... Wonderful thought for the day, Colin -- thanx for sharing! :) Yvette

king who I kneel --> king whom I kneel


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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
    many thanks xx
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