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Comment by

crzypnter

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Hello dear Ronni,
I love your thoughts on this poem. The statements are profound in their sentiment, where it's true there are no wrinkles or grey hair in eternity, we see our loves as they were when we first fell in love. God bless
August

Comment Written 18-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020

Hi dear August,
Yes, our true loves are and always will remain in our hearts and
souls, and when they happen while we are still on this earth
all the more incredulously fortuned and blest we are! I hope
you find one such eternal love friend. Take care, thanks
again for sharing so endearingly. And bless you for xtra star too!
Blessings always, Ronni

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Diana L Crawford

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Lovely! I've always loved this sentiment! This would have made a great Valentine's Day poem too! Full of absolute love, and hopefully, the other will love for rest of theirs too! :) xoxo

Comment Written 18-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020

Hi dear Diana,
Thanks for your lovely thoughts and appreciations on this dear,
this is the kind of promise and love that surpasses any or all
other, no matter how instantly tempting or yearning. Hope
yours is of the promise and abiding love in your life and world
dear friend!
Still on that ladder catching up dear...I am in awe of your energy
and prolific talents, and keeping on posting them.
Love, blessings, Ronni

reply by Diana L Crawford on 24-Feb-2020

ha! yeh, its been pretty busy trying to get 2 poems in a day either as a contest or just a post. I have no idea how my muse can come up with stuff. LOL! no worry about responding. I just hope you are feeling better these days! xoxo

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And that, my beautiful friend, is all the promise of love should ever be...! :) :) For, as mortals, it is all that we truly have to offer... A perfect offering for the romantic soul, Ronni, and your presentation makes it all the more impactful for the emotional side of us all! ;) :) Thanx for such a gentle smile and soft caress this afternoon... much appreciated! :) :)
Hope that ladder's gotten a bit shorter these days -- mine is probably three times as long as yours: note that I'm still two days behind on answering posts...ugh! :) :) I'll get there, though! ;)
Take care of you and I'll be seeing you (in all the old familiar places.... ) :) :) Yvette

Comment Written 17-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020

Ah my dear Yvette,
You've got it so right in your very first sentence dear! And there
are no short cuts or substitutions for this eternal promise, it is
there or it is not! I hope there has been such and experience
and promise fulfilled and still abiding in your love life and world
dear friend! Ladder is getting plenty of use still LOL...and still
like you catching up...and gee let's swoosh in a tea break in
between the ladder rungs dear...we can both use it LOL!
Thanks again ;) :) dear busy Dixlie Belle!
Blessings always, Ronni

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Think in eternity we will be clothed in a flawless body. Many blessing for a great week. Love is important for all to know that they are loved.
Patricia

Comment Written 17-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020

Hi dear Pat,
Your wise and witty thoughts and comments most dearly
appreciated dear! Aced the message and theme perfectly.
So lovely to see a Profile pic of you, a treat indeed, and thanks
so much for sharing your always most welcomed comments.
Hope you have abiding love in your life and world always
glowing and warming your smile and sparkle in your eyes.
Blessings, always! Ronni

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Gypsy Blue Rose

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Hello, Ronni,

I like your profile picture :)

Your poem is fantastic, it's something that sounds like a line in a romantic movie. Very well written.

Gypsy

Comment Written 16-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020

Hello Gypsy,
Thank you for your lovely and gracious comments and compliments
on this poem. So happy you enjoyed and shared so kindly.
I love your 'Blue Rose' profile pic! Most enchanting and intriguing
as most likely reflects same qualities within you sweetly abiding
within. Thanks again.
Blessings, best wishes, Ronni

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Do you mean: 'for the rest of mine' in your last line? This would make more sense. I love the sentiments here, very warm and loving . . . love Dolly x

Comment Written 16-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020

Hi dear Dolly,
Yes dear...you noticed it and was changed immediately dear..thanks!
I am pleased you were touched by the endearing and loving sentiments. I hope you always have an abundance of warm and
loving sentiments shared with you dear friend!
Love, blessings, Ronni

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Joan E.

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Good, Sunday morning and productive, new week! I enjoyed your love song, especially on this Valentine's weekend. Your presentation is quite appealing as well. Here's to "eternity"! Big smiles- Joan

Comment Written 16-Feb-2020

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"Promise"
When I first read this which didn't take along, my first thought was, "Cross my Heart and Hope to die"
...
Most people don't appreciate the free and finer things in life.
Like fresh air and water and God's Colored Gift this Earth.
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"Promise"
Was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
...
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024

Comment Written 16-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020

Thank you Ricky,
for your most perceptive and sincerely appreciative thoughts
and compliments so generously shared! May your abiding
loves be promises forever coming true.
Best wishes, Ronni

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A beautifully succinctly poignant and an honest assessment that anyone can make to another. We can't promise to love others for these lifetime, but we can for ours, but then eternity for those that belief can be a promise, well done, great post Ronni, blessings, Roy

Comment Written 16-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020

Hi Roy,
You aced it so perfectly friend, so pleased you enjoyed and
shared such appreciative and complimentary thoughts.
May your special love be promises kept and come true.
Blessings, Ronni

reply by royowen on 24-Feb-2020

Thanks Ronni, bless you

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Janice Canerdy

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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this concise, romantic poem. It conveys a powerful message through a sweet promise of enduring love.

Comment Written 16-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020

Thank you Janice, so pleased you enjoyed and shared
so thoughtfully and perceptively. Hope your special loves
are abiding and fulfilling within too!
Best wishes, Ronni

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