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Potlatch - Duo Rhyme

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Aiona
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What a fun poem! I like that it rhymes and has a pleasant meter. The topic is funny -- sad but true! I like "my thoughts mix like a pot of brew." Although.... does one mix brew? I guess you do. But usually I think of stew when I mix, rather than brew. Brews just kind of..... well..... "brew." You stir a little when you add sugar to your tea or coffee. And brewed beer only mixes in the initial stage. Then it mostly kinda just sits and ferments.

Anyway! Funny poem! I liked it very much!


 Comment Written 22-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
    Thank you for the kind comments and feedback.

    Have a great day,
    Sandra.
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I think we all feel like this at times, nothing to write that comes to mind, but you've tackled it well in your duo-rhyme Sandra. Well rhymed and works well.
cheers
valda


 Comment Written 20-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
    Thank you for the kind comments and feedback.

    Have a great day,
    Sandra.
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Sandra, This is a very well written poem you have penned for the potlatch poetry club entry using the Duo Rhyme format. You used very good and very cute words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing. love and blessings, Teri


 Comment Written 19-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
    Thank you for the kind comments and feedback.

    Have a great day,
    Sandra.

reply by Teri7 on 24-Feb-2020
    you are so welcome! blessings, Teri
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This Duo Rhyme is very well done. I was looking for good examples, and yours really fits! I'm so glad you got your Muse back, maybe I will find mine, also. Your rhymes work very well!


 Comment Written 18-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
    Thank you for the kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a wonderful day,
    Sandra.

reply by Mary Kay Bonfante on 20-Feb-2020
    You're very welcome, Sandra. Wishing you a wonderful and blessed day, too!
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Oh boy, I'm sure this is the sentiment of many writers! HA! just when you thought you had something - poof! it disappears, and then the muse returns and opens the flood gate. It amazes me actually that we can all create such different work from just 26 letters in the alphabet! lol! really appreciate this! :)


 Comment Written 18-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
    Thank you for the kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a wonderful day,
    Sandra.
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I like that you call your muse your "writer's knight!" And I'm glad that he/she has returned. Good job with your Duo Rhyme poem and I like how you are so organized as you always have a plan for what you write each day.


 Comment Written 18-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
    Thank you for the kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a wonderful day,
    Sandra.
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Hello Sandra. You have complied with the writing style for this Duo Rhyme standard. It's a tough day when the muse checks out for a while but wonderful when it returns.

Robert


 Comment Written 17-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
    Thank you for the kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a wonderful day,
    Sandra.
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Hooray for the muse who rides in to save the day (or the poem!)... :) :) A very interesting format, this duo-rhyme: kind of a 'bookended' monorhyme... :) :) :) Great job and thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette


 Comment Written 17-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
    Thank you for the kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a wonderful day,
    Sandra.
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Dear Sandra,
Your excellent Due-rhyme poem has a wonderful end to writer's block! It appears that you worked well through it! Sometimes I feel as though my poems write themselves; especially, ones that our free form and I write for publication!
My best,
Deborah


 Comment Written 17-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
    Thank you for the kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a wonderful day,
    Sandra.

reply by DeborahWrite on 20-Feb-2020
    Have a wonderful day and thank you
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I relished your "Knight" analogy and the fact that your muse returned! I am glad you were inspired by the Club's prompt to create this poem in Duo-Rhyme. Cheers- Joan


 Comment Written 17-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
    Thank you for the kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a wonderful day,
    Sandra.
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