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Sleeping Dictator


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I'm thinking he didn't get enough... since he went nutty and off'd himself! :) :) A flash from the past that, I'm afraid to say, some young students these days wouldn't 'get' with the 'fronts' reference... :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette


 Comment Written 22-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
    Guess it's not for them.
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He doesn't seem to rest too much. Thank God he's always on the job. He's the man! He's had a lot thrown at him and it irks those who can't make it stick. Nobody likes it when the other side gets elected. Parr for the course. Bernie's Russia ties should be worrisome. Good art by Bertoldi. Marilyn


 Comment Written 21-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
    Heavy is the head... Right?
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I am glad to see that you too not only enjoy the 5-7-5 form, but Renate-Bertodi's artwork. Your short poem is quite thought-provoking and makes us think more about what constitutes a dictator. Sighs- Joan


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    Thanks, Joan. Yes, the Renate-Bertodi stuff is curious and compelling.
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Dictators should never enjoy a good night's sleep! If only they recognized the enemy was within themselves. Interesting 5-7-5, Bill. The picture is too cute for the content.


 Comment Written 20-Feb-2020



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    If only dictators used their dictatorship for goodness instead of badness.
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This is a very interesting and very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very interesting imagery. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri


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    Thanks, Teri
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Anyone who dreams of fighting on two different fronts at the same time should probably wake up. Man that dude has got to be worn out, shell shocked and in dire need of being replaced by some rescue troops.


 Comment Written 20-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
    I heard he had a bunker mentality.
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Awesome artwork, awesome metaphor. awesome 5-7-5. You continue to surprise every time you raise the quill. I was guilty of dubbing Obama the new Hitler years back but what would I know? I also didn;t know then that the Clintons killed people. DJ


 Comment Written 20-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
    Yeah, I heard they killed Lincoln when they found he was a Republican and are suspected of helping video kill the radio star.

reply by djsaxon on 20-Feb-2020
    Lincoln? Shit, I thought that was Trump.

reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
    My mistake.
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