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Not Yet Over


a 5-7-5

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nomi338
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Therefore, choose your steps wisely. One false move may very well prove to be your last. Look for footprints, if they end abruptly, that is not a good path. Abort! Go in a different direction.


 Comment Written 28-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
    There?s probably a reason a road is less traveled.
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Another great poem Bill I could mull over for hours and find multiple meanings. That's the blessing of the philosophy here, you write in a way that allows different people to find their own meaning. A great read!


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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
    Thank you, Auryn
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This is an interesting, thought-provoking poem. It helps the reader reflect on their life from when they first started out to where they are now. All the struggles, hardships in between, nicely done.


 Comment Written 27-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
    Thank you, MD, for the kind review. Bill
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Most people do strive to reach the top and there are many different ways to get there, I like the artwork you chose for your poem, a very different route, an excellent short poem****kahpot


 Comment Written 26-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
    Thank you, kahpot
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This is thought-provoking. I'm sure it's very philosophical. There's no short-cuts? Or perhaps, no roads in life make us get younger? Guess we have to stay the course...


 Comment Written 26-Feb-2020



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    Take the hill!
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Hello, Bill Schott,

Your 5-7-5, Not Yet Over, is a fine poem. I like the presentation and the syllable count is right. The picture is okay but I don't like words over the picture...it distracts away from your poem. Good job.

Gypsy




 Comment Written 26-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
    Thank you, Gypsy, for the positive review. I'm not sure I have much control over how Fanstory displays work.
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Hi, Bill, Confuscious say, "Sometimes in order to get to the other side, one must work your way through the obstacle." I suppose one could go around too. :)


 Comment Written 26-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
    Sounds like tunnel-vision. :)
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