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A Spring Thing


Just around the corner...

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AprilViolet
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What a beautiful picture you used for your poem! It goes along perfectly! Oh how I long for spring! It's so close I can almost touch it! Wonderful poem with great descriptions. Six stars!


 Comment Written 28-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
    You are best! Thank you so much.🙂
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moongirlwriter
 
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Oh gosh I really do like this tribute to spring. Nicely done and you came in second place. Good for you. . .and congrats. This is the way I feel about spring. Your poem flows well and makes me smile.


 Comment Written 28-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
    Thank you for your kind words.
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Raffaelina Lowcock
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A very lilting poem that adheres to the Writing Prompt of this contest. There are many good lines, yet these tickle my fancy...

"Naked trees are finally dressed
in leafy gowns, their very best."

"The bears are stirring in their dens,
their long slow slumber finally ends."


 Comment Written 27-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
    Thanks for reading and for your kind words. I'm glad you liked it.
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WriterHeather
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This is a very beautiful poem with a perfect rhythm. Such lovely descriptions! Now I'm excited for spring! I love your picture. Good luck in the contest :)


 Comment Written 27-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
    Thank you so much!
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Susan X Smith
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This is certainly a fitting poem for the contest and it is a refreshing ode to the upcoming season. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 26-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
    Thank you for reading my poem, and for this nice review. :)
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kahpot
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A wonderful rhyming and flowing poem, describing the change of seasons with very descriptive words, the artwork is great, an excellent presentation, best wishes for your contest****kahpot


 Comment Written 26-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
    Thank you so much for this great review.
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