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The Bouquet Ladies


a 5-7-5

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BeasPeas
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This is excellent, Bill. I got a kick out of the unique image and 5-7-5 combination. You've followed through with your theme in all three lines. Marilyn


 Comment Written 29-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
    Thank you, Marilyn
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Hahaha. I love this play on words. "Flowever" and "mum's the word." What a strange picture for anyone to take, but it certainly went well with your poem.


 Comment Written 29-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
    Thank you, Yvonne
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Hi Bill, what an unusual 5-7-5 poem and even more unusual words and images. l liked it a lot though. Trust you to write something like this. All the best. Ulla:))


 Comment Written 29-Feb-2020



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    Thank you, Ulla.
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Hi Bill. Clever shit as always. Anything I say will sound patronising. Bottom line is, you are the proud owner of an intelligent pen. Cheers - DJ


 Comment Written 28-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
    Thank you, DJ. My pen thanks you as well.
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Good heavens! Who came up with the 'Bud-heads' to replace the butt heads?! :) :) A unique offering, Bill, and I guess your title of 'bouquet head' is much more graceful than mine... :) Thanx for sharing your flower-play on words 5-7-5! ;) Yvette


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    Thanks, Yvette.
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That's delightful artwork. She is excellent. "Flower ladies is a good name for them. Excellent fun with words like 'flowever" and "mum's." An enjoyable bit of whimsy. We do like think we're always growing better. judi


 Comment Written 28-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
    ...and smelling good.

reply by judiverse on 28-Feb-2020
    A lovely floral scent. judi
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OK, I can now retire to a small quiet corner of the world. Never in my 70 plus years did I ever imagine that I would see Afros that resemble the Afros that me and my bros sported back in the 60s and 70s. Wow! Mind blown!


 Comment Written 28-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
    So these must be your flower children.

reply by nomi338 on 29-Feb-2020
    Not mine brother, I wore a raincoat. In fact sometimes two.
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Ha ha ha, this made me smile and we have Mother's Day coming up and I love flowers, but rarely receive them now that my husband has gone, this is a sweet write Bill, love Dolly x


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    Thanks, Dolly
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Ha, ha, ha... verrrry punny, Bill... I have a few questions about the Bouquet women... Do they exude Flower Power? Do they only have Flower Children? Are all of their daughters' professional Flower Girls? Do they mate with Mandrake? ;)


 Comment Written 28-Feb-2020



reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
    I heard they like pot and drink Bud.
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That was very clever wording, Bill. I thought the word, flowever, was a wonderful descriptive new word, and I especially like the last line, Mum's the word, lol!! Well done, this would have done well in a contest! :)) Sandra xxx


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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
    Thank you, Sandra.
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