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I Fall In Love With Your Smile


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Pearl Edwards
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A lovely kyrielle poem Sandra, with the lovely smile being the original attraction that turned to love. Nice romantic poem about a loving relationship. cheers, valda


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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback.

    Have a wonderful weekend,
    Sandra.
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Your Kyrielle is well written, Sandra. Yes, I agree that the smile attracts and is the hook to keep us interested. Ending couplet reaffirms the message. Marilyn


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I enjoyed your Kyrielle love sonnet with its alternating rhymes, rhythms, and repeats. Your use of "knight" is very romantic. I am pleased you were inspired by the Club's challenge. Smiles- Joan


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I believe this ticks all the boxes as far as syllable count and rhyme scheme goes. Very nicely expressed romantic sentiments as well. Good job with this Kyrielle.


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Great job with your kyrielle sonnet, Sandra! I liked how you described the love between two people that was sparked by the beautiful smile that encouraged the conversation that led to the relationship.


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Hello, Sandra du Plessis,

I like your Kyrielle Sonnet....I Fall In Love With Your Smile... it is very well written. I like the form. The rhyme scheme is good. Well done.

gypsy


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Hello Sandra. The poem conforms to the writing style of the Kyrielle sonnet. In looking at the picture, it reminds me of a TV host from 30 years ago. Her name is Joan Lunden.

Robert


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    Sandra.
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Everyone seems to have at least one great feature that people fall in love with, maybe it's a smile or the eyes. I like eyes myself, but smiles are always great. Well done. Rox


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    Sandra.
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Sandra, This is a very well written poem about this great smile on this woman's face. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the picture you shared. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri


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What a nice poem. It is heartfelt and touching. I liked the way it speaks of all the simple things that make up love. It really touches the heart. Great job

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    Sandra.
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