I'm Often Alone But Never Lonely
300 words In Support of Mental Health Awareness Week 		Pays: 10 points.
77 member cents
Contact Us | En español
   
         Join today or login

Status

New Here?
Sign Up
Fast! Three Questions.

Already a member?
Login

Contests

5 Line Poem
Deadline: In 2 Days

Flash Fiction
Deadline: In 5 Days

Children's Poetry Contest
Deadline: May 24th

True Story Flash
Deadline: May 27th

Rhyming Poetry Contest
Deadline: May 30th


Writing Classes

0 classes available. Click here locate a class and to learn more.

Rank

Poet: None
Author: None
Novel: None
Reviewer:None
Votes: None

Recommended


Categories


Write


Reviews from
Rhyme Class Coming


A variation on Frost's Fire and Ice form advertises a class.

  38 total reviews 
Comment by
rjuselius
Premier Author
Premier Reader
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  215
Author Rating For Short Works
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  284
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
This is a profound piece of poetry dear pantygynt! I love the important, insightful and enjoyable social commentary.
Bravo and well put my friend!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a super-dooper squeeze!
Rebekka x


 Comment Written 05-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
    Many thanks for this lovely review. Glad you liked it.
Comment by
StellaAnastasia
 
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
This was very well written and is a great way to advertise the classes that you offer. I actually didn't even realize you could take courses on Fanstory. I love the imagery as well as the rhyming style of your piece.


 Comment Written 05-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
    Thank for this review. On your profile page you will find the Main Menu. In there you need to click on Classrooms. Click on that then on the class you are interested in and the details will come up. If you want to try for the scholarship go to Social and Clubs then Scroll down to Scholarship club. Joining commits you to nothing but more details become available and I will write to you to welcome you to the club.
Comment by
Brenda Elizabeth Rose
 
Review Stars
 
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Excellent and clever interpretation of Frost's work. The picture and font colour scheme worked perfect with this piece. I liked your comments after the poem. Great job. Blessings. ~Brenda


 Comment Written 04-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
    Than you for these kind remarks in review.
Comment by
amada
Premier Author
 
Poet Rating
 
Author Rating For Short Works
 
Author Rating For Novels
 
Script Rating
 
Review Stars
 
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
I celebrate the strong language that you use, especially the line ab out fire and ice. Of course, each of us here in this site would like to write like this, with such passion and aggressiveness. I m visually impaired, I wonder but I would like to participate...


 Comment Written 04-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
    Thank you for responding to this. I would love tto have you join the class. We use a program called Teamspeak3 that allows to talk to each other in real time during the classroom sessions and I imagine you have a way of coping with your visual problem since you are active on the site. Out written communication has always been via email so if you can read those and attachments to them i can see no real problem, but you would need to be the judge of that.
Comment by
2020 Poet of the Year
royowen
Premier Author
Premier Reader
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  1
Author Rating For Short Works
 
Author Rating For Novels
 
Review Stars
  
 
 Rank:  1
 

#1 Ranked Poet!
#1 Ranked Reviewer!
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
For awhile now I've been exploring the various forms of rhyme, and find fascinating repeated line poetry, such as the villanelle, rondeau, quatern and kryrielle, I even invented a multi rhyme form I called rime sestera, and a repeating form I called a taknas. But yes, I agree with Robert Frost I'm afraid. Well done my friend, go well, blessings, Roy


 Comment Written 04-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
    Many thanks for these comments. There is room for all tastes of poetry in my opinion. That is why I call my class, Rhyme a poetic device rather than a form in itself.

reply by royowen on 04-Mar-2020
    I?m actually agreeing with you. All forms are valid, otherwise self righteousness reigns supreme.
Comment by
Gert sherwood
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  111
Author Rating For Short Works
 
Author Rating For Novels
 
Review Stars
  
 Rank:  217
 
Gert sherwood Recommends:
Four Bright Stars
response to Jesse James Doty poem Be Cool
Pays:10 points
10 member cents
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Hello to you Pantygynt
Robert Frost is one of my favorite poets.
I see that you did an excellent way of letting us fanstorians
aware of the advantages to come and enjoy the fray
Gert


 Comment Written 04-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
    Thank you so much for this complimentary review of my advertisement for the class.

reply by Gert sherwood on 05-Mar-2020
    You are welcome Pantygynt
    Gert
Comment by
Dorothy Farrell
 
Review Stars
 
 
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
Hello Tom, this has to be the classiest advertisement for a poetry course, or indeed anything at all. This is really well written and a joy to read. Your first stanza with reference to Peter denying Christ thrice before the cock crows twice - lucky to have that old word 'thrice'. Well written with reference to Robert Frost - nice picture, nice looking man. Well this stanza should pull in the poetry and the religion lovers. Clever.
Next the nitty gritty of the actual subject - the various poetry forms old and new. A well written stanza number two. Number three - again brilliant. Very impressive - a Scholarship Club, that word caught my eye. All in all an incredibly well written poem and I wish you well. Very nice, colourful display. Regards Dorothy x Review a bit long so - E&OE.


 Comment Written 04-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
    No. I am not Tom! He's the boss, I'm Jim and I just teach. Lol. Many thanks for reviewing this advertisement.

reply by Dorothy Farrell on 04-Mar-2020
    OMG Jim - I meant just that JIM. Just a dizzy moment - I have them often. Dx

reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
    Dont worry about it. You got one letter right. Lol.
Comment by
Teri7
Premier Author
Teresa Shortess
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  65
Author Rating For Short Works
  Rank:  48
Author Rating For Novels
 
Review Stars
  
 Rank:  47
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
This is a very interesting and well written poem about your rhyming class that is soon approaching. You used very good words and a nice invitation to come and join with you all. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Who knows, maybe I will check this out! Blessings, Teri


 Comment Written 04-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
    You would be most welcome I can assure you. Many thanks for reviewing.
Comment by
Joan E.
 
Review Stars
  
 
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
I enjoyed your use of Robert Frost's Fire and Ice form to promote your class. One of these days, I hope to be less over-scheduled and be able to take one of your appealing classes. Enjoy your April class- Joan


 Comment Written 03-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
    I shall look forward to 'one of these days' then. Many thanks for this supportive review.
Comment by
MissMerri
Level 1 Pro
Merri, Premier Author
 
Poet Rating
  Rank:  7
Author Rating For Short Works
 
Review Stars
  Rank:  98
 

#7 Ranked Poet
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
I truly loved this poem. It is clever, it is also beautiful, and it carries a lot of meaning as well. It makes me want to take your class.

I think I could definitely learn a lot from someone who writes like this.
I will sign up for sure. I'm glad there are still some who resist the extinction of rhyming poetry.

Thanks for sharing this.


 Comment Written 03-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
    I am pleased you liked my little advertising jingle. It was I thought a horribly over-egged pudding, but that is what it was designed to be -- to show what could be done rather than what ought to be done. I would love to have a 'natural' poet of your calibre on the class.

    Thank you so much for giving this a six star grade.

reply by MissMerri on 04-Mar-2020
    I thought it showed the extraordinary talent and creativity of its author, and therefore deserved a six. ;?)

reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
    :))
  -1-  2 3 4  Next Page 


Market your book.
Advertising options.
Quiet Lawyer Chapter 11
Can a broken heart be mended?


Share or Bookmark
  Contact Us | En español | Advertise With Us

© 2015 FanStory.com, Inc. All Rights Reserved. Terms under which this service is provided to you. Privacy