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The eagle has a reputation for seeing so much and they are clever and intuitive birds and I enjoyed your Haiku about them, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

Comment Written 05-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 06-May-2020

Thank you and sorry for the inordinate delay in replying.

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"Eagle sat thinking", is short, succinct and very much to the point. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.

Comment Written 05-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 06-May-2020

Thanks a lot and sorry for the delay

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 07-May-2020

Sanku,
You're welcome and late is better than never.
God bless and take care,
the Duchess

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Loved the illustration and I do like eagles - we have many where we live. As I understand the haiku, I sense it's the eagle that has taken a resolve to face the storm whereas the other birds were too "chicken" (pardon the bird joke.) It's a good message for us to be noble and brave like the eagle.
There are many rules to haiku that I haven't fully mastered but I can recommend reading Gloria's notes in her post: https://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?id=969391

I think you do have elements of the kigo (the seasonal reference in your storm) and the satori ending can be found there.

Comment Written 05-Mar-2020

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sorry for the delayed reply .Thanks very much

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This isn't really about birds, is it? I don't think eagles can fly that high. I'm not sure I totally understand it, but I think it's about rising above the 'storm.' Good luck in the contest.

Comment Written 03-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 06-May-2020

Thank you very much .sorry my reply was delayed.

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Eagle sat thinking
Hello, Sanku,

575
The first two lines connect grammatically.
the satori is okay. The presentation is nice but the font is hard to read. I would make it bigger and white. I wish you good luck in the contest.

Comment Written 03-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 06-May-2020

Thank you very much .sorry my reply was delayed.

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Yeah, I like that. Why fear the storm and turn back when you can soar high above it, looking down at it. I believe that this is what that majestic bird would do. I love the message of this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!

Comment Written 03-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 06-May-2020

Thank you for your review. I am sorry my reply was delayed.

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Thank you for sharing this haiku. I was told recently by a publisher than English haiku do not follow the 5-7-5 syllable format. That is not what I was taught. Anyhow, it appears this poem has the correct conventional number of syllables. Good luck with your contest entry!

Comment Written 03-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 06-May-2020

Thank you very much for your review .sorry for the delayed repply

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A very well-written haiku about the birds struggling to fly away from the storm while the eagle watching them he sat and thinks that he will fly above the storm.

Comment Written 03-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 06-May-2020

Thank you very much for the review .sorry for the delay

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This is a very well written Haiku poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest., Blessings, Teri

Comment Written 03-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 06-May-2020

Thank you very much for your kind words.I am sorry for the delayed reply

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-Nice artwork and
presentation, Sanku.
-A well written haiku
with effective nature
and seasonal imagery.
-Eagles are such majestic creatures.
-You show how perceptive this one is.
-I like how you have the
eagle's decision as the satori.
-Good luck in the contest.

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Comment Written 03-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 06-May-2020

Thanks very much for this review and I am sorry I am replying so late.

reply by Pam (respa) on 06-May-2020

You are very welcome and no problem with a late reply.

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