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Empty Inside


Abc's of loneliness

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Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, the13thpoet,

....Empty Inside...is a beautiful poem.

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Abc's of lonliness ......is misspelled. (loneliness)


I can really identify with your poem... well done.


 Comment Written 06-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 10-Mar-2020
    Thank you.
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An awesome offering for the ABC contest... really like that not only are you able to pull some real emotions into just a few lines but you've also managed to sprinkle it with some rhymes for a gentle feel to the heartbreak... well-done. :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)


 Comment Written 06-Mar-2020



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    Thank you.
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I think this is a good entry for the ABC Poetry contest.
This short verse tells of a love lost.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon


 Comment Written 06-Mar-2020



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Well you certainly captured the sentiments of loneliness and it is hard not having a loved one there and when my husband died I really did think he would still walk through the door and it took me a long time to get used to it. Heartfelt words here, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 06-Mar-2020



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    Thank you Dolly.
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Good morning, my friend. What a heartbreaking poem, Very relatable. It's so well-written that a reader can feel your pain, your sorrow on every line. Searching for answers as to what went wrong. Nicely done.


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This is a very well written ABC poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good words, but please check the instructions one more time. The ABCD is good, but the last line can't be in sequence. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri


 Comment Written 05-Mar-2020



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    Thank you Teri.
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An excellent and pointed short verse poem with deep emotions throughout. This should fare well in the ABC poetry contest. Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :)


 Comment Written 05-Mar-2020



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    Thank you Sally.
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Another fine poem, Roddy, and one that sums up how I felt right after I was forced out by my ex, total desolation. I still don't understand what she's thinking, but the desolation is less acute now


 Comment Written 05-Mar-2020



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    Thank you Mike.
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This is a sad ABCD and I hope it is fictional. It is simply expressed and an easy read. You have also included rhyming which is great and added an "E" line.. Well done.


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    Thank you persevere.
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