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Comment by
Gert sherwood
 
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Hello Lulube
Your free verse poem and the picture of some one felling sad, made me feel for their sadness.
To let you know I'm sending a somo with my review when my rating is 5 stars .
Gert


 Comment Written 06-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
    lol you got it!! sorry for you feeling sad but then that's what was going on. great comments in this review

    lulube

reply by Gert sherwood on 07-Mar-2020
    Lulube
    you are welcome with a smile.
    Gert
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Y. M. Roger
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A very beautiful rhyme scheme you've chosen for the contest... and what a beautiful picture of independent people that have something when they are together.... they probably feel like you're lost and drifting when you're online a lot, but the fact that they can bring you tea is a comfort for them... it is too bad there's no way for you to comfort yourself when they've physically left... Again, a beautiful picture of independent people accepting each other.. ;) :) Thanx for sharing such a revealing look at a modern relationship -- good luck!! :)


 Comment Written 06-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
    awesome comments that perked me right up this morning. thxs for that and this wonderful review

    lulube
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Eve Lovell
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Hi, you are lucky that he brings you green tea, what a darling, my worse half likes to be waited on, but he is a marvellous provider and often away, so I don't mind. He loves a surprise for dinner, and you wouldn't believe how hard it is to cook something different all the time, lol. If only that were everybody's main worry, hahahaha, I am lucky indeed.

I think your poem deserves a five star rating. I enjoyed the intimate details and I always try to make my writing reflect what's happening in my life and the life of my family, so I could relate. Thanks for sharing your writing and best of luck in the competition. Cheers, Eve.


 Comment Written 06-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
    thxs so much for stopping by, I have never seen your work here but I will now. thxs for the awesome comments and the personal story, glad you could relate so well with this poem. but writing with your life's experiences and in the emotional moment that has grabbed you, is a big motivation that you don't have to seek. will check your work out.

    lulube

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Gypsymooncat
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Writing is choc
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This was a sweet, wistful and lovely poem you've penned for, presumably, your partner. It's really great when we have supportive partners who actually bring us a cuppa when we've been online for HOURS (or days lol) and even better, cook us a meal as well. I enjoyed the sentiment in this poem; you bring across your gratitude for having someone so special in your life, which adds to the overall flavour. Good luck in the votes!


 Comment Written 06-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
    for hours or days, and days, so much to do on the computer these days. lol the housework gets pushed around a lot but I've relaxed on being too, I'm this way so do it my way. and nothing fell apart. lol thxs for this great review

    lulube
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