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My Horse and I


Racing the storm

  48 total reviews 
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nancyjam
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A nicely rhymed and strong metered story/poem.
Great descriptive imagery lets the reader share your experience and the relief as you made it to the barn safely.
Thanks for sharing.
Nancy


 Comment Written 14-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
    Hi Nancy,
    Thank you for the excellent analysis of the writing. I appreciate the encouragement.
    Debi
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Hello to you w.j.debi
What a wonderful poem written in rhyming couplets.
Along with your authors note telling us readers in prose; of how you prayed and got your request by you asking for the help from our Lord. Best to you in this contest.
Gert



 Comment Written 14-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
    Hi Gert,
    Thank you for the encouraging comments and analysis. I appreciate it.
    Debi

reply by Gert sherwood on 16-Mar-2020
    You so welcome w.j.debi
    Gert
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Benny Beeharry
 
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Hi just in time for the safety from the storm. It must have been a great relief. I have seen what a storm really is. Very graphic , the details are full of country side imageries, I love them...like my village back home which has become iconic for me and my inspiration.
God bless
Benny Beeharry


 Comment Written 14-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
    Hi Benny Beeharry,
    I am glad this poem could remind you for home and that you felt the relief of outracing the storm.
    Debi
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flylikeaneagle
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WJ: great witness of prayers and an amazing timing with the rain.
I'm glad you can testify that the storm passed while you and your
horse stayed dry. BRAVO. I like riding horses and your sweet poem.
flylikeaneagle - nancy


 Comment Written 13-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
    Hi Nancy,
    It is good to hear from another horse lover who also recognizes the power of prayer. It was a wonderful day in every way.
    Debi
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Excellent AABB rhyming. Your riding shows a canter-like rhythm throughout your poem. I enjoyed your theme for the club. We Aussies are all about horses. I started riding at age 5. Thanks for sharing a colourful set of quatrains.


 Comment Written 13-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
    Hi Aussie,
    It is nice to hear from another horse lover. I think my grandfather gave me my first pony around five and I've had a horse ever since. I am glad you enjoyed the ride.
    Debi
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A thoroughly enjoyable read - sharing this 'horsey' moment with the poet and the horse as they gallop along 'with spirits high/ across the fields, my horse and I'


 Comment Written 13-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
    HI zanya,
    I am happy to hear you enjoyed this 'horsey' moment. I appreciate the encouraging review.
    Debi
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This is so beautifully written. I enjoyed it very much!

I felt the connection between the horse and rider. I experienced everything you wrote. My favorite part was the barn scene watching it rain. I was THERE, I could see and feel ad breathe the rain.

BRAVO!! Very well done.


 Comment Written 13-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
    Thank you for this wonderful review and for the six star rating. I am so happy to hear that you could feel you were along for the ride in this experience.
    Debi
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Jeffrey L. Michaux
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I like this little adventure in the rain. It's always fun when caught out in it to stay and play until drenched, or, try to get out as dry as you can. I enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done!


 Comment Written 13-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
    Hi Jeffrey,
    It sounds like you enjoy a good rain shower. I am happy you enjoyed this poem. Thank you for the encouragement.
    Debi
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No matter what kind of poem it is or was supposed to be, I absolutely love it. I could feel the rhythm of your horse's hoofbeats as I read along. I'm fact, I could almost feel myself riding a horse. I'm glad you got out of the rain!


 Comment Written 13-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
    Hi Susan,
    Thank you for the encouraging comments. It is so nice to hear that you could feel the rhythm of the hoofbeats. Yes, I am glad we were out of the rain too. I was so grateful.
    Debi
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George Anderson
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Great description in your poetry. I like how it all comes together so nicely. And the rhyming flows like water. Very smooth. Excellent job altogether.


 Comment Written 13-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
    Thank you for the encouraging remarks about the writing. I appreciate it.
    Debi
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