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Batman gets Eaten.


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Great entry for the 80 word flash fiction contest Aussie and a very take on this corona pandemic madness. We have a local park that's been taken over by the bats and destroyed, but no you can't move them on they have more rights than us humans. Enough from me, I enjoyed this one,
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valda


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
    Hi Valda, Yes, they are protected (I don't know why?) They have been infecting people for years, without gloves the Khaleesi virus is deadly. I think we are in for a long ride with this nasty virus. Stay well friend, thanks for reading. Love, Kay.
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The world is crazy right now. I heard from my nephew this morning that someone had stolen all the toilet paper from the first floor of the hospital where he works. That is pretty sad.
People thinking there are going to be shortages and then hoarding is creating the shortages in my opinion. I know we need to be careful, but I hope people calm down and start to think rationally soon.
Thanks for sharing your take on the crisis.


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2020



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    Thanks for reading. Panic buying is just hurting others. America is going to be hit hard, the President is doing all he can. In Oz we are far away from Europe and not so many cases, so far! Cheers, Kay.
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This is a very cute and well written 80 Word Flash Fiction you have penned for the contest. This is a very different take with Batman and the mask. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. It make me giggle as I read it. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri


 Comment Written 16-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
    Hello my friend, glad you liked. I try to make light of it, it is very serious though. Stay well away from big gatherings! Love, Kay. XX
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K, this is an entertaining read. I enjoyed it for it topical subject. The corona virus is certainly stealing the show at the moment - and Australians look to be full of shit with all the chaos on battling for toilet paper and draining the shelves. Ridiculous!
Stay safe and wash your hands. ~DDxx


 Comment Written 15-Mar-2020



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    G'day Daring Dreamboat, Yes, ridiculous and selfish. People like myself, aged & disabled are hoping we can get it when we need it.
    Tanks for reading my friend. Love, Kay.
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Hi Kace, I am with you...it has turned to pure greed...
but I am proud of the Internet stores...they have all canceled the accounts of people trying to rip the people of...Amazon, eBay, and two others...they will have to face God in the end...or when He chooses...very well written my wonderful sweet friend...it's so good to see you...I finally posted something...mom is still in rehab...but will be coming home in a few days...so I tried to slide one in...LOL...love you much...Linda xxoo


 Comment Written 15-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
    G'day blossom, Nice to see you taking time to write. Aged and disabled (that's me) are going to get what we need. Now the supermarkets have decided to open earlier to cope. Why don't they stop the greed, cause they would miss the money. Much love, kace.

reply by l.raven on 15-Mar-2020
    Hi Sweetie Pie, they will have to face God for what they have done...I truly believe that...it says in the bible not to do that to family and friends...how can people be so evil...they are cutting hours here...this is just crazy...just stay in pray my sweet angel...love you...xxoo

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
    Our lives will change forever. Our ANZAC Day remembering those who served/died in all wars has been cancelled, first time since WW11. Going to read your post now. XX Kace.

reply by l.raven on 16-Mar-2020
    I think this will die down like AIDS did...we have always for as far back as I can remember had flu's/viruses...yes this one is stronger...but I believe it will die down...greed has fueled the fire...take care sweet you...thank you for reading...smiling big...xxoo
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This is excellent, Kay. Best of luck in the contest with this terrific entry. Here in the states it's nearly impossible to find toilet paper, also. Who starts these ridiculous things? Makes me wonder the mentality. Marilyn


 Comment Written 14-Mar-2020



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    Bunch of sheep, one jumps the others follow. Aged and disabled (that's me) are going to be given different times to shop. Glad you liked my take on it. The little man is suffering already. Like France, non essential shops closed. Think you could bunk in with the squirrels? At least they've got nuts!
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It is craaaaazy out there, Aussie -- went to the store this morning and the 'paper' aisle looked like the store wasn't even open because the shelves were BARE!! A great offering for the Flash, my lady -- best of luck to you! ;)


 Comment Written 14-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
    Hey, It's going to get worse. It's up to the supermarkets to limit goods; so far its not happening. Thanks for reading my friend. Have a good day/evening? XX Kay.
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I think this is a good entry for the 80 Word Flash Fiction contest.
This short piece has a strong and clear message.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon


 Comment Written 14-Mar-2020



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    Hi Sharon, It is serious and getting worse. Thanks for reading friend. XXK.
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Hello Kace, a good 80 words on a dire situation. As if the virus was not enough to worry about, we are faced with people stock piling enormous amount of toilet paper. I do not think diarrhoea is one of the symptoms. LOL. We are all worrying I am sure about this terrible threat, but there are always some who thrive and take advantage. Well done and good luck - Love Dorothy x


 Comment Written 14-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
    Hello Dorothy, Yes, dire and getting worse. Closing the countries to travelers is a good idea. No toilet paper here, and what for? Thanks my friend. Love, Kay.
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You are right, Aussie. The panic buying is here, too. Lines at the store (with little left to buy) are like Black Friday. What was that woman thinking (not). I read that the corona virus started with bats. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan

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 Comment Written 14-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
    I am not bias but... the Chinese/Asians will eat anything that even moves!
    Our bats carry the Khaleesi virus, must be handled with gloves. I tried to make light of a very serious situation. Finally Mr Trump has accepted the fact. Love, Kay.
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