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Antonym Poem Contest Entry

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George Anderson

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I was secretly hoping on a picture of a velociraptor and the hunter trying to hunt one. Jokes aside this a good entry and I like the chosen words for it.

Comment Written 18-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020

HA! I scratched my head for a few minutes, completely befuddled by the velociraptor comment then...DUH! Very funny. Thank you, George, for this great review and the gracious stars! Much appreciated. Thanks for the laugh.

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Gypsy Blue Rose

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Antonym Poem Contest Entry
Clever Girl

Hello, my friend,
I really like your poem for the antonym contest. It makes sense. The presentation is lovely. Well done.

Comment Written 18-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020

Thank you so much, Ms. Rose! I appreciate your great review and all those stars. Lovely comments. Glad you liked it. Have a great day!

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Jeffrey L. Michaux

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I guess we older folk call it walking around sense. I love the message conveyed in this. Just about everyone has it and I guess we should be as you've so eloquently stated, without excuses if we don't have it. Thanks for sharing this humorous and well written work. Well done!

Comment Written 16-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020

Thank you, Jeff. I love 'walking around sense.' lol I appreciate you taking the time to read and review this and thank you again for these great comments and all those stars. Glad you liked this. Thanks!

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Lil' Mormon Boy

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This is a very good Antonym Poem entry.
It reminds me of my daughters. Your photo compliments your poem very well.
Very good job.
Thanks for sharing.

Comment Written 16-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020

...reminds me of my daughters... Ha! Indeed! Thank you so much for this great review and gracious stars. Much appreciated. Glad you liked it.

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Y. M. Roger

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Brilliant indeed... guess that would explain why we are inundated with such brilliance on a daily basis...? :) :) A wonderful offering for the antonym -- best of luck at the polls! ;)

Comment Written 16-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020

HAHAHA! You crack me up, girl. Yes, that is EXACTLY my point. Thank you so much for this delightful review and dazzling stars. So much appreciated. Have a great week. HAHA! Still laughing!

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Alcreator Litt Dear

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Though real achievement of success is temporary at the grace of cleverness, innocence activation may bring in fruition at par with performance upon common sense; well said, well done.

Comment Written 16-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020

Well this is quite the review! I loved it. Thank you so much. I appreciate your time and all those stars. Have a great week.

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DragonSkulls

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Exceptional

This work has reached the exceptional level

Hahaha. Thank you for the laugh, author. Finally, someone who rags on stupid people too. Lol. I do a lot of that on here myself. I love the antonym. Great entry. I wish you the best of luck in the booth. Hilarious.

DS

Comment Written 15-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020

Thank you for this awesome review and all those stars! Even though I am a woman, my pet peeve is a STUPID woman. With a touch of charm and innocence they get away with anything they want. It's a skill I admit I haven't perfected yet. LOL. Thanks again for this generous review and sixer. Much appreciated.

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Sharon Haiste

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I think this is a good entry for the Antonym Poem writing prompt.
This short verse tells of ignorance and brilliance.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon

Comment Written 15-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020

Thank you, Sharon! This was fun to write and I'm glad you liked it. I appreciate your comments and all those stars! Thanks so much.

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Debbie Pope

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My goodness. These antonym poems are good. Yours makes brilliant sense. I like how your second line relates to your first word and your third line relates to the last word. And you have a good transition from line 2 to line 3.
The entire thing is well done. Good luck. This should do well.

Comment Written 15-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020

Thank you so much, Debbie, for this excellent review! I'm so glad you liked it. I appreciate your time and all these stars. Your comments are great! Thanks again.

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