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The Threats We Face


Potlatch - Roundel

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A lovely Roundel about staying spiritually strong and calm during the Corona Virus threats. All we can do is look after ourselves, stay as well as we can, you said it well Sandra,
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valda


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    Have a wonderful day,
    Sandra
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Thank you for the reassurance during this current pandemic. I admired your Roundel's rhymes and repeats and your sympathy for those who have been victims. Sighs- Joan


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What a beautiful poem/roundel, a wonderful message and hope for safety, and great artwork for this work, an excellent poem, very well written****kahpot


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2020



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There might be one positive outcome of this pandemic and that is people will all work together, not what race, sex, age or political stripe.

That said, this is a fine roundel with a good uplifting message.

Another fine write from your quill.

Gloria


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Hello Sandra. You've done a good job meeting the roundel style for this poem. There is a panic in the world. I recently compared the virus to the pale horse in Revelation. Some people didn't like that.

Robert


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Good advice, Sandra, and very well done. Fear has gripped everyone, supplies are short as people panic and hoard things. I like the rational thinking you express here and the skill to write this piece. Marilyn


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This is an excellent roundel on a timely subject. I agree with you that we need to keep things in perspective. We will miss anyone who passes on due to this virus, but we also need to keep faith and hope in the future.


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Wonderful job with your roundel, Sandra, with a great and soothing message! I like your refrain of "no need to fear" and somehow the daily body counts continue to urge the fear.

By the way the disease is "flu" not "flue" (a chimney part)


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This is an excellent Roundel about a critical topic. The beneficial advice it contains is poetic, accurate, and written well. The form is complicated and isn't always easy to achieve. Thanks for sharing, Sandra!


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Roy, This is a very well written Rondel poem you have penned with a lot of good wisdom in it. Our church is still open until there is not reason for it to be open. We just have to take precautions and use wisdom. Thank you for this great poem my friend. Blessings, Teri


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