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Retetition entry

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samandlancelot
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"Please give me some space" is certainly an appropriate line to repeat, over and over. I'm a cashier at a grocery store, and we practice social distancing at the checkout lane now.

You have a rhyme in every stanza except the first one.

Patricia


 Comment Written 20-Mar-2020


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ExperiencingLiphe
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Can we just make this a permanent thing even after the virus. I don't know why people have to be so close and right on top of you anyways. You did a great job and I couldn't agree more.


 Comment Written 19-Mar-2020


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A very well-written repitition poem about being prepared and vigilant about the latest threat for the human race a virus we cannot see but is extremely deadly. We have to do all we can to prevent it to get to us.


 Comment Written 18-Mar-2020


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What a timely entry for the Repetition writing prompt entry. You chose the perfect line to repeat, partly because its your theme but also because repetition is what it sometimes takes for a message to get through. Well done. Good luck in the contest. It won't affect ratings or success in the contest, but when you typed the name of the entry, you typed retention. Just a head's up :)


 Comment Written 18-Mar-2020


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Such a good idea to stay in home for the time required in order to stop the spread. I wish everyone would take it seriously. Nice work on this one. Best wishes.
Drew


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2020


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your poem is well-written and oh-so-timely! Yes, we have to face the seriousness of this crisis. The line about treating the precautions like the latest craze--best line


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2020


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It is interesting how we all feel about this virus. I try to stay away from people as instructed, but I don't mind if they come near me. I have never been able to turn people away. I also work in a nursing home and we have to be so careful because this virus could easily kill them. We scrub our hands until they are raw. I don't know how long this virus will last, or how much damage it will do, at this point I am just following the CDC recommendations and praying.This is very well written. Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2020


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This is a great commentary on the corona virus, Mystery Author. Your repeated line fits in naturally and is used as a great emphasis. Your message comes through clearly. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2020


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Certainly fits our life style these days. Staying in is ok, but I miss our children and grandchildren that I'm use to seeing almost daily.
At least the house is spotless and germ free! Haha.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Nancy


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2020


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Frank Jauregui
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Blessings to you and your entry. I thought your humorous Repetition poem read well, and the topic was so timely. I pray all those who read it would take caution in trying to protect themselves and others from the Corona Virus but not to panic.


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2020


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