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a twenty-word poem

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Bill, this is a great entry for the 20 word poem contest.
It is reflective in its message and full of alliterative flare.
The pictured crowd was obviously done before the act of social distancing came into play. Best of luck in the competition. ~DD


 Comment Written 27-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
    Thanks, DD. Stay safe.
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This is a very well written 20 Word poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri


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    Thanks, Teri
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A very nice twenty word poem entry for the contest. I love your uses of so many S's.
The problem with that is I have a lisp. Ha, ha.
Thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 26-Mar-2020



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    Thanks, LMB, for giving this a look. Bill
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I feel like a snake after reading this, and I had to clean spit off the table! What a tour de force of alliteration to carry the message that being civil to each other can actually be quite simple. Stressless solidarity is essential, and it's what we want.


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    Thanks, LisaMay
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Nice work with all those words that begin with S. I hope we will see civility in these trying times, instead of partisanship. Leaders need to set the example. Let's hope adversity will bring out the best in people. Best of luck in the 20 word poetry contest. judi


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    Thank you, Judi

reply by judiverse on 24-Mar-2020
    You're welcome. Survive! judi
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Well, now, that is alliteration at its finest... especially with such a 'sane' and rational message - great job!! ;) Thanx for sharing, Bill, and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette


 Comment Written 22-Mar-2020



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    Thank you, Yvette.
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What a very well-written poem, a great summary of our current situation. We may not like this solitude but it's the only way we're going to get a handle on things. I do hope they find a cure soon. Stay safe, my friend.


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    Thanks, MD
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People must do exactly that--select situations. They must learn to love themselves and enjoy being alone with themselves.


 Comment Written 22-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
    Thanks, TT, for giving this a look. Bill
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Yes, though I do hope this situation does not become second nature, to work as one while asked to separate, it is a weird time for all of us, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot


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    Thank you, kahpot
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This is excellent. Perhaps the silver lining in all of this virus mess will BE solidarity when we realize how important it is to get along. Well composed with excellent alliteration and illustration. Marilyn


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    Thank you, Marilyn
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