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Jen Vasquez
 
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Cute... Simple I definitely can feel the amount of love he has for this particular woman....The 1st sentence sounds a little funny "somewhere on this world" other then that great work..


 Comment Written 29-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
    Thanks, Jen.

reply by Jen Vasquez on 29-Mar-2020
    No problem.. at all
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Alcreator Litt Dear
 
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We do not know our real state and position or place of living, but the lovers believe to meet at the same place here to begin a new day with joy; a nice love poem; wish you win the contest.


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
    Thanks, ALD
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A lovely thought about love being right there. It's reassuring to have that constant love in your life. What is your subject for meet in the next to the last line? Very striking artwork choice. Best of luck in the contest. judi


 Comment Written 27-Mar-2020



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    The subject is understood as YOU from the previous line.

    you remain you meet

    Happy day
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jenintorre
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What a wonderfully romantic poem. Your few words say such a lot.I think this is a very good entry for the love poem competition. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.


 Comment Written 27-Mar-2020



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    Thank you, Jen
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How lovely, Bill... alas for us, I have no 6 to give you so you'll have to settle for the lip service. It's a beautiful poem, it's very touching, totally 6-worthy. :)


 Comment Written 26-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
    Thank you, Susan, for the nice review. Bill
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by Bill Schott

Hello, Bill,

Beautiful entry for the love poem poetry contest. It's very romantic and well written. I like the presentation too.


 Comment Written 26-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
    Thank you, Gypsy
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Hello Bill, this is a lovely poem of love - short but real. It sounds personal and sincere. I like the picture and the whole is a lovely presentation. A good entry to the contest. Good Luck - regards Dorothy x


 Comment Written 26-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
    Thank you, Dorothy
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Awe, Bill, this is a lovely love declaration, and so lovingly written. I is a short poem, indeed,but the words speak volumes. A great entry for the contest and I wish you the best of luck. Ulla:))


 Comment Written 26-Mar-2020



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    Thank you, Ulla
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What a sweet poem. It's so warm, heartfelt. Your great word choice paints a vivid picture in the reader's mind of a couple madly in love. Good luck with your contest.


 Comment Written 26-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
    Thank you, MD.
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thaities, Rebecca V.
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Yes, we do not know when we will no longer be here, but while we are we should greet each day with joy. If we wake up happy then our day has started off on the right foot. Well written meaningful poem!


 Comment Written 26-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
    Thank you, TT, for giving this a look. Bill
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