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Not Her


a monostich poem

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Interesting presentation. The one liner poses a question
that could be interpreted two ways and made into a story. Great use of consonance and alliteration.


 Comment Written 01-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
    Thanks, Shari
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I really like the one liner which has a sneaky play on words. This is a very nice intriguing one liner that has a little symmetric twist to it, but it comes back to the title of this one liner, which is: not her.


 Comment Written 01-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
    Thanks, Mary, for giving this a look. Bill

reply by Mary D Hollingsworth on 02-Apr-2020
    Hi Bill, just wanted you to know that I'm going to be closing this account and getting my old account so don't respond I will contact you when I'm back on I have the same name so I won't be hard to find. And yes I lost it God's son 2 days ago to the virus and his whole family is now in the hospital I solicit your prayers. But again please do not respond I'm going to close this account. I'll contact you or you'll see my name for my new account soon God bless
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This poem reads clear and to the point. Could have a double meaning of either she's hot to trot or not well favored. Imaginative, with strong internal rhymes.


 Comment Written 31-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
    Thank you, Brett.
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Very good monostitch. Well crafted verse. Simply stated and very much straight to the point. Good luck with the contest. I'm sure your readers will appreciate this. Solid effort.


 Comment Written 30-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
    Thank you, Brenda

reply by Brenda Henderson on 31-Mar-2020
    You're welcome!
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Well put . This is quite unique how it's worded. Follows the guidelines. I like that's it's clear .. simple and to the point... Very well done great work


 Comment Written 30-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
    Thank you, Jen
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Incredibly great content. Very simple and straightforward. Message passed and received. Lovely rhymes, very easily understandable. Nice write up.


 Comment Written 30-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
    Thank you, Opeyemi
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Well, sounds like she's a keeper... perhaps? Or, if your goal is to bother them... perhaps not. :) :) A fun offering for the One-liner, Bill - best of luck! ;) Yvette


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
    Thanks, Yvette.
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Her security is vital, let others bother your brother and mother, you never wish to bother her, your love; well said, well done in this one line poem.


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
    Thank you, ALD
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Hahahahaha! Very good! I loved all of the internal rhymes in the poem. That made it a lot of fun to read. Good luck in the contest, I'm sure you'll do well :)


 Comment Written 26-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
    Thanks, Susan
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Awe, so who is the mysterious 'her' ? This is a great one line poem, a monostich that leaves a great deal to imagination and interpretation. What is more it has internal rhyming. I liked it a lot, Good luck. Ulla:))


 Comment Written 26-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 26-Mar-2020
    Thank you, Ulla
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