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Eve of Destruction


What if the coronavirus was but a warning?

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This is a very intriguing story. I like the Apocalyptic glimpse on this pandemic that conquer the entire globe. I like you sconce-fiction approach with a little hint of conspiracy theory. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.


 Comment Written 29-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
    Appreciate your insights and the review.
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OMG that 1st paragraph speaks my very thoughts. The ending is good too. The real virus is the fear which has grown faster than the virus in exponential leaps and bounds. Eckhart Tolle has two presentation on this issue. If you get fb check it out. I am voting for this.


 Comment Written 29-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
    Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.
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Judgment Day had to come sooner or later - you've just speeded it up in your biting social comment on the impact of Man's 'progress'. The tribunal is more powerful obviously than other authorities.


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
    Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.
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Eve of Destruction

Hello,

Good word count. I am guessing this is about aliens.... a different take on our present crisis. I believe the news reporters. The only person I don't believe is the stupid president.


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
    Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.
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This is very interesting and very well thought out. You're absolutely right. We have made a mess of everything since we've been in charge. We've raped and pillaged this planet of its natural resources, polluted the oceans, displaced and caused species of animals to die or become extinct. I know that we've hated and warred, and infected each other without cause instead of walking in love with each other. Yeah, I think that you're right. Our time is about up. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
    Appreciate your insights, the encouragement, and the review. Glad you enjoyed this posting.
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I think this is a good entry for the 200 Word Story writing prompt.
This sci-fi story is well told and clear.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
    Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.
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That's one way of looking at the virus . . . and its aftermath.
I suspect you're right--mankind is probably to blame. Yes, we've mucked up the natural order of things. But I doubt there's any superior force
ready to lower the doom on us. Our demise will be more like the 'death of a thousand cuts--and completely self-inflicted.

Best of luck with the voters.

Peace, Lee


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
    Appreciate your insights and the encouragement, as well as the review. Glad you enjoyed this posting.
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You make several valid points, Mystery Author. Will we ever know what and who caused this covid-19? Maybe, but the blame game will continue. Your lines read well with great attention to detail. There's good flow to your story, too. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan


 Comment Written 27-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
    Appreciate your encouragement and insights, as well as the review. Glad you enjoyed this posting.
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You are weary of the warning, man is super intelligent; everything has its time and duration, we will experience what we are supposed to; there is nothing fishy about the man-made invasion, mankind will survive safe; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this; wish you win the contest; Help upgrade my premier shield membership; stay home save lives.


 Comment Written 27-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
    Appreciate the review. Asking other members to upgrade your membership is actually against site policy.
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This story, Eve of Destruction, pretty much puts the kibosh on getting out of this epidemic with the whole skin. This narration pretty much condemns the human race for shortsightedness and being a punk.

Is it --- I've grown wary of waiting.
or ------ I've grown weary of waiting.


 Comment Written 27-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
    Appreciate the nit catch. Glad you enjoyed this posting that depicts the human experience as a punk. Good term. Appreciate the review.
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