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Viewing comments for Chapter 66 "'Til Break of Dawn"

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A very well-written love poem about two lovers that spend their nights together with passionate live until the break of dawn when the passion is all well fed.


 Comment Written 29-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
    Thank you for the encouraging reivew
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Love's labour lost and now regained, after days now to keep and continue keeping the commitment for love, once again, no more joyful tear; well said, well done.


 Comment Written 29-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
    Thank you very much
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A beautiful love poem that is born of a lifelong devotion! I liked the ethereal/spiritual feel of these lines: "We'll stroll across the galaxy,
my arm in yours, just you and me."
Best wishes in the contest!


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
    Thank you so very much
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A beautifully and deftly written entry in this love poem contest Bar. Sweetly written in tetrametric stanzas and a progressive mono rhyme, that keeps the poem on course, and reads beautifully. Good luck, blessings Roy
Typo ; Our passion(')s love.


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
    Thank you so much for the great catch, I have problems with whether to or not. Thank you again for the support

reply by royowen on 28-Mar-2020
    Bless you
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Barb, This is a very romantic poem you have penned for the Love Poem contest. You used very good romantic and loving words with very nice imagery from the art work. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri


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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
    I am honored and I thank you
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Very nice rhythm and rhyme; doesn't seem forced like many poems do. Much of the imagery would fit a spiritual theme as well--perhaps try to double-dip! Cheers. LIZ


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
    I am honored and I thank you
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A midnight romance that rings in the morning... beautiful offering for the contest, Barb! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette

our passions love --> our passion's love

'cause tears of joy is all --> a tear of joy is all OR a joyful tear is all


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
    Thank you , thank you so much for the always appreciate help and second set of eyes. I changed both
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What a wonderful accompanying photo . It nearly looks like lovers entwined in a silhouette of passion.
Beautiful accompanying words as usual Barbara. Good luck in the contest.

dip


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
    I am honored and I thank you so much, coming from the number one romantic piece writer.
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Susan X Smith
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This is a lovely romantic poem and an excellent contest entry. Your use of rhyme throughout the piece is well done. I would suggest changing "To" in the title to "The" or "Till." Also in the last line, I think it should read "tears of joy are...." rather than "tears of joy is...."


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
    You are so right, I changed the last line and used 'Till. Thank you for the second set of eyes and the help. Always wanted.
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