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Viewing comments for Chapter 61 "My Dog and Me"

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A very well-written poem about the relationship between a boy and his dog that us a bind that cannot be broken and they care about one another for the rest of their lives.


 Comment Written 29-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
    Thank you so very much
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What a fun poem, Barb. I loved reading it. Your couplets are great. The story told is one that many may remember something similar in their childhood. I love the POV and the perfect art choice. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
    Wow thank you so very much, it was fun to do
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This was sweetly written as if a child growing up showing that he is and will be a man.
he talks on this cowboy we're using his love for his pet and that he has a cap gun and you better not forget!
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 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
    I am honored, thank you
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Oh, what a simple life, a cowboy with his dog, horse and work outdoors. Enjoyed the fun imagination of the more innocent days of children's imaginative play.


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
    I wish more kids did that today. Thank you
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Ha, those old horses on a stick really knew how to ride fast especially when they were herding cows and wrestling a bronco.

Excellent and most entertaining post, Barb. Always good to bring us all a smile.

Many thanks for sharing. :)

Gloria


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
    Thank you so very much
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Barb, This is a very cute and very well written poem you have penned about the little cowboy and his trust dog! You used very cute, descriptive words and very neat imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this my friend. love and blessings, Teri


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
    Thank you, I love doing children's pieces.
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Hooray for Cowboy Jim!! What a lovely and lively offering, Barb!! Even if you don't publish it (if you're like me, you've about given up on that), you should at least have someone put it to pages with coloring pictures for little hands to read and color!! ;) Love it, love it to death, my lady!! ;) Thank you so much for the smile today!! ;) :) Yvette


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
    AAAWWW I would love to but I told my kids that they will get rich when I die if they publish some of these. LOL Thank you so much
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This is so cute for a poem about a little Cowboys life growing up with his flop eared pal.riding the range is a hard job for a little cowboy.


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
    Absolutely right and thank you so much

reply by country ranch writer on 30-Mar-2020
    Smiles for all
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Your dog is really lovable, he is intelligent, sober, prospective and trained, moreover he does perform his jobs so well, even he does something secretly lovingly; well said.


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
    Thank you so much for the encouraging reivew
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Another rootin', tootinist gall darnedest poem for the chillun', Barb--'yee-haw!' In case you are wondering, that's my cliche-ridden impression of how a cowboy talks!


 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
    Yep, got it. lol Thank you so much
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