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Viewing comments for Chapter 65 "Ted Takes On The Cat"

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Hi Barb! This was a great punchline! I loved it! I loved the fact that Fred was laughing his tail feathers off at the fact that Ted had no tail feathers! LOL That was really cute... a great children's poem! :)


 Comment Written 14-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
    Thank you so much and I am so glad you enjoyed. I am not a script writer in any way
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A very well-written script about Ted and Fred whose adventure nearly ended in disaster when teasing the cat, Ted got barely away and lost his hind feathers that make him off balance in his flight.


 Comment Written 30-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
    My first attempt at script and I think my last. Thank you
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Woo-hoo! You did it, Barb! You wrote a script! I'm so happy to read it! Ah, poor Ted got into scrapes again. Good that he has Fred for a friend but he better not laugh too long.

"and it's paw hooks Ted's claw. " (its)
"The cat turns it's attention toward" (its)


 Comment Written 29-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
    Thank you but it was hard to do for a first try. Thank you for the help and the encouragement
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It's really giving out a nice vibe around your plot and I love the way it has emphasized the plot. Keep up the good work and keep practicing. Loving it.


 Comment Written 29-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
    When a four is given, it is accompanied with a suggestion how to improve so please give me your idea how to improve.
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Poor Ted, who nearly paid the price for his foolishness regarding the cat, but the one who warned Ted not to be so foolish, Came to his rescue, distracting the cat enough to fly away, but lost his tail feathers. Heh heh. Some excellent poetic words after that, well done Barb, blessings, Roy


 Comment Written 29-Mar-2020



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    Thank you so much, it was a challenge and I had to take up the challenge but I do feel it is my first and last like this. LOL Thank you so much

reply by royowen on 30-Mar-2020
    Well done
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Some just have to learn the hard way. Ted's lucky to escape without his tail feathers. I bet that was a funny sight to see. Good job, Barb, with the humor and the rhyme. Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 29-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
    Thank you so much, it was a challenge and I had to take up the challenge but I do feel it is my first and last like this. LOL Thank you so much

reply by damommy on 30-Mar-2020
    You did so well.
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Ted takes on the cat and somehow wounded, he had no feathers on his derriere, Fred being the leader could understand what happened; this is a very fantastic poetic script; I enjoyed the read.


 Comment Written 29-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
    Thank you so much, it was a challenge and I had to take up the challenge but I do feel it is my first and last like this. LOL Thank you so much
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Delightful! Witty and in perfect rhyme to boot. This is devilishly clever--with a hilarious closer. What a pleasure to read--and with pay! Cheers. LIZ


 Comment Written 29-Mar-2020



reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
    My first attempt at a script and I have learned to respect those who write them. LOL Thank you
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