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Pathetically conquered...


...in Amerika

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Sally Law
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Fear has always been a great motivator. There's two types of fear at play here. The kind that that tells a person to not play in the highway because they'll get run over, and irrational fear of: everything is out to get me. The devil is always out to get us. He hates us. No question. That's his job 24/7. But we are fallen, mortal, and frail of flesh, easily preyed upon. The Spanish Flu, which has a striking similarity, killed 50 million. It didn't care who you were. It rose on the tired of war and overcrowded situations. Ours could be worse or it could surpass it. It's hard to say at this point because I think we have excelled as I said it would three weeks ago. My state is party central this time of year and is growing fast. I would stay aloof even if I weren't ordered. Our society unfortunately, can't think for themselves and the dependence on the nanny State has never been clearer. You have not many nails right on the head with your thought provoking piece. Government control has been fostered for a long while, and the kingdom of the Antichrist is set to go. I personally think Jesus will return very soon, but not everyone sees this. Interesting days ahead. Hang on to the Lord, D. Draw close to Him in prayer. I'm praying for you and yours,
Sal xo


 Comment Written 31-Mar-2020


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MARIANNE GI
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Excellent work, it concerns all of us and certainly awakens us. You have put some thoughts that never crossed my mind. What you wrote should be shown on every channel but I am sure they would never allow it because as I said before, your words are very awakening. Excellent work!
Marianne


 Comment Written 30-Mar-2020


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It's really giving out a nice vibe around your poem and I love the way it has emphasized the plot. Keep up the good work and keep practicing. Loving it.


 Comment Written 29-Mar-2020


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