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Potlatch - Fibonocci Spiral

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That was a wonderful commentary poem about current events. I can't believe what is going on around me, much less the world. It feels like a burden to bare. We must pray for all to go back into normalcy again. Also, we must be flexible to the changes ahead. Try not to worry. God bless you.

Nice work :)


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    Sandra.
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Yes, hopefully it will be over sooner rather than later. Nicely done with your Fibonacci Spiral poem Sandra. Hopefully things and society will be much for compassionate and caring afterwards.
cheers,
valda


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I am sorry to hear you are short of food supplies. In the Canaries food has been plentiful and the shelves well stocked, we have been lucky. I hope this scary time passes soon for everyone, a clever write Sandra, much enjoyed, love Dolly x


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Sounds like this poem acknowledges reality but offer hope at the very end. I like the half rhymes with brim/then/kin in the second half. Quite the Fibonacci Spiral poem here. I suspect many readers will relate to this theme today and for a while longer. Nice post.


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Your poem is creatively composed, descriptive, and timely, conveying a powerful message about the events of the present day. There are still oblivious people out there just doing as they please.


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Perfect use of this fibonacci form to express our self-isolation time. I'm sure you must miss your children and grandchildren. Hope you are well supplied with all you need.


 Comment Written 30-Mar-2020



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What a fascinating artwork and effective use of the Fibonacci form! I admired your comparing our lives to a "spiral". We have not met with our son for three weeks, because he is afraid of contaminating us, since we are over 75 and I have underlying health issues. Be safe and well and here's to seeing "new light"- Joan


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Sandra, This is a very well written Fibonnaci Spiral poem you have penned for the Potlatch challenge. You used very good descriptive words that go well with the imagery you chose. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri


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Your poem strikes a chord. I think we're all feeling that way to some extent. I'd not heard of the Fibonacci spiral poem before. An interesting form. Keep well. Keep safe.


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