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Glitz and Glamour


No pretence now

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This poem, Glitz and Glamor, finds that very sense in the natural world. People look in all the wrong places to be closer to God.


 Comment Written 20-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
    Hello Bill, Thanks so much for reading. May god bless you. regards, Kay.
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Aussie,

You've captured a brilliant photo of God's majestic painting.

I liked 'fear is not a poem fear is a reality.'

If you aren't with God now, now is the time to return.

Very nice!

Patricia


 Comment Written 20-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
    Amen! Thanks for reading and yes, time is running out. I believe He is sorting the wheat from the chaff. Blessings, Kay.
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Wow, this is an incredibly powerful poem! The form and rhyme scheme that you choose to adopt is incredibly effective and contributes to the poem overall. Best of luck in the contest!


 Comment Written 20-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
    Hello Anya, Thanks so much for your kind review. We need to look up and ask for help. Some never will. It is the time for the sorting of the wheat from the chaff. Blessings, Kay. XX

reply by Anya Trofimova on 22-Apr-2020
    Your are very welcome! All the best to you, Kay.
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The virus is certainly making it clear what is important and what is not. So often we get caught up in the business of success and things. You are right, we can run, but we cannot hide and we need faith in the Father to make it through.


 Comment Written 07-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
    Thank you for reading and glad you enjoyed. And Underneath are the Everlasting Arms. Easter blessings for you, love, Kay.
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AMEN! "Now is the time to return," this is a true word that you have spoken. This is a well-penned call to prayer. We need to recognize that this is the time for us to repent, both as individuals and as a culture. The whole world needs to repent and plead for God, the ruler of all the Earth, to restore our health, life and sanity and return us to a place of wholeness.


 Comment Written 05-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
    Mary, Thank you for reading and getting the message. More than ever we need His love. Blessings, Kay.
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That's a superb photograph you took, K. And what a fine poem to go along with it for this contest. Some excellent lines here, such as the dark lord who seeks his own hoard. Your cadence is terrific too and you've used your poetic devices very well.

A top notch poem that should do well in the booth. Many thanks for sharing. :)

Gloria


 Comment Written 04-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
    Gloria, High praise from you. It just came to me, I needed to write about current times. Thank you for reading and your good wishes. Love, Kay.
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This poem is a tribute to being humble, being grateful for life,
being appreciative of life, being glad to be alive, having empathy for others & realizing life can end at any moment.

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 Comment Written 03-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
    Roberta, Thank you for your heartfelt review. I was critically injured in an accident, lost my leg. I have learnt humility and faith in the Lord.
    Blessings, Kay.

reply by Roberta Lawrinsky on 05-Apr-2020
    Hi Kay--
    Thank you.
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Well done. Good choice of rhyming words, fresh turn of phrase: time you cannot bend...magic surprise. Clever wordplay: man/manna. (sun rise s/b sunrise) Cheers. LIZ


 Comment Written 03-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
    Hello Liz, Thanks so much for reading and your kind review. Cheers, Kay.
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I love your poem is so serene and wonderful. The photo adds lots of points to the content and is acting like a mirror- what you describe can been seen in the poem.
"See the beautiful sun rise
Beauty of magic surprise
Only the Lord can supply
His majesty to human eye
"
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.


 Comment Written 03-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 04-Apr-2020
    Hello Iza, Thanks so much for reading, so pleased it touched your heart. Love, Kay.
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This is hopeful and helpful, Kay. Your comments are wonderful and so is your poem. The image is delightful. Did you take it? I'm assuming that you did. These are such good lines:
"Oh, man bend thy knee
To the Lord your plea"
Marilyn


 Comment Written 03-Apr-2020



reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
    Hello Squirrel, Yes, I love photography. I was inspired by Spirit to write this poem, there is still time for man to recognise his God.
    Bless you my friend. Love, Kay.

reply by BeasPeas on 04-Apr-2020
    It's an amazing photo.
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